It's just a fantasy

Sep 25, 2005 23:10

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For Challenge #83, Sometimes a Fantasy. 100 words.

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"Take that and that and that!" Cyril pummeled his father backward into the fridge. Seamus slipped on the split milk, took a jab to his eye, went down, and lay eerily silent on the cheap linoleum. His eyes faded to dull; his leg twitched ( Read more... )

ch 083 sometimes a fantasy, w: watergal

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pride_of_erin September 26 2005, 14:49:30 UTC
Oh, that was a clever answer to this challenge - great depiction of a horrible moment on the show. *sniff* Poor Cyril.

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watergal September 26 2005, 17:09:34 UTC
Thanks for all the inspiration you provide.

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blackchaps September 27 2005, 12:33:24 UTC
I liked the way you put the little details from the show in his fantasy. Good job on this one!

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