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HT100 Challenge #71: Games
Mar 10, 2005 22:59
pre-season fourAs he walked past the O'Reily's (
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slip_f18
March 11 2005, 05:01:03 UTC
What a great parallel you've drawn. And the last lines -- chilling. Great job.
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lisacali
March 11 2005, 18:23:55 UTC
Thanks!
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rustler
March 11 2005, 05:39:55 UTC
But if he made early parole, he'd be out before it was too late. He'd make it up to them.
Oh, man. No, sorry to break it to ya Beech, but your really, really won't.
Good bite to this one. Nice job!
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lisacali
March 11 2005, 18:25:10 UTC
Thank you!
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visionofblue
March 12 2005, 10:07:30 UTC
Ooh, rather liked this. The parallels, which was already mentioned, and that realization and vow to do it differently next time that always comes after it's already too late.
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lisacali
March 17 2005, 22:01:32 UTC
He's can be so heart-breaking, can't he? Thanks for the comments!
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rileyc
March 19 2005, 15:34:12 UTC
*sniff* Lovely job, Lisa, and I also adore the juxtaposition, makes it all the more poignant.
Poor Toby. Poor kids.
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lisacali
March 24 2005, 12:42:17 UTC
Thanks so much, R.
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Oh, man. No, sorry to break it to ya Beech, but your really, really won't.
Good bite to this one. Nice job!
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Poor Toby. Poor kids.
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