HT100 Challenge #71: Games

Mar 10, 2005 22:59

pre-season fourAs he walked past the O'Reily's ( Read more... )

ch 071 games, w: lisacali

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slip_f18 March 11 2005, 05:01:03 UTC
What a great parallel you've drawn. And the last lines -- chilling. Great job.

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lisacali March 11 2005, 18:23:55 UTC
Thanks!

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rustler March 11 2005, 05:39:55 UTC
But if he made early parole, he'd be out before it was too late. He'd make it up to them.

Oh, man. No, sorry to break it to ya Beech, but your really, really won't.

Good bite to this one. Nice job!

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lisacali March 11 2005, 18:25:10 UTC
Thank you!

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visionofblue March 12 2005, 10:07:30 UTC
Ooh, rather liked this. The parallels, which was already mentioned, and that realization and vow to do it differently next time that always comes after it's already too late.

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lisacali March 17 2005, 22:01:32 UTC
He's can be so heart-breaking, can't he? Thanks for the comments!

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rileyc March 19 2005, 15:34:12 UTC
*sniff* Lovely job, Lisa, and I also adore the juxtaposition, makes it all the more poignant.

Poor Toby. Poor kids.

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lisacali March 24 2005, 12:42:17 UTC
Thanks so much, R.

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