HT100 Flash Fiction Challenge #12 - X Marks the Spot: In the Darkness

[kitestringer]

As always, thanks to maverick4oz and rustler for comments, suggestions, and encouragement.

Comments

[kitestringer]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :-) It's pretty scary to imagine *most* people in Oz getting their hands on the Ring, isn't it? But yeah, Keller and Adebisi (and Schillinger and maybe Ryan O'Reily) are probably among the scariest. *g*

[adrianabr]

A., you amaze me! First I thought "Rebadow and Busmalis at a storage room?? Is is a NC-17 fic???" Then for a nanosecond I thought Bob had hidden his engagement ring there and it was just found. But when you used the "precious" speech... that's when I got it (I know, I'm slow...). Anyway it's a great story, thanks for sharing it!!!

[kitestringer]

No, you're not slow at all-I *wanted* people to be wondering what was going on at first! *g* I'm so happy that you enjoyed it!

[counterfeitcoin]

Well that was different. And interesting. I'm tempted to take back every bad thing I've ever thought about crossovers.

[kitestringer]

I'm tempted to take back every bad thing I've ever thought about crossovers.

Really? Cool! :-)

Thank you for the feedback!

[lisacali]

Oh.My.God! Who woulda thunk it? This is incredible, so very right on. The voices were dead-on perfect, and the whole tone lent itself perfectly to Oz *and* LoTR. The way the two went so quickly from best of friends to deadly enemies, and so believably, was just chilling. I never thought I'd be saying that a Busmalis/Rebadow story was one of my favs, but this certainly is on my list. So well done!

[kitestringer]

:-D You've made me very happy! :-D I know you're also a big fan of LotR, so I'm really glad the tone seemed right to you.

Thank you so much for the feedback!