HT100 Challenge #69: The word for today is ... encroachment

Jan 31, 2005 12:25

Lockdown fic; Toby's first time on top -- or almost. And, of course, over the word limit.

~Step by Step~Stretched out on his belly, head resting on folded arms, Chris gave every appearance of contented repose. Toby wasn't sure he believed it. Reaching out to touch, stroking that smooth back, feeling muscles knotted with tension, confirmed his ( Read more... )

w: rileyc, ch 069 word of the day

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ozsaur January 31 2005, 15:19:48 UTC
And, of course, over the word limit.

Oh, who cares? This is wonderful!

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catheights January 31 2005, 16:15:53 UTC
Oh this makes me ache with the implication of why Keller is so tense. And I love that last line. Beautiful writing.

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rustler January 31 2005, 19:26:44 UTC
Rich, evocative, and lovely. It's nice when Beecher gets something right. :-)

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kitestringer February 1 2005, 03:00:52 UTC
Mmmm...I'm really liking the way people are getting inspired by these words! This was lovely. *happysigh*

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