HT100 Challenge #63 Punch Drunk Love: Bitch

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One word. Just one syllable. Five letters

Comments

[fbf]

You know when I read this challenge this was the first thing I thought of. this moment where Toby demonstrates that he isn't tame and is nobody's bitch. I'm glad to know that someone did it. *claps* nice job.

[ultraviolet730]

Another scene that's painful to watch. I have to admit that I actually like Keller's line, but I can see why Toby did not. And exactly why the word would set him off.

I like the beginning of this, where Toby ponders words as a weapon. Nice job!

[tobyfan]

Ooooh! This is really good, Rose. You do a great job of getting into Toby's head at this moment. Kudos!

[adrianabr]

You know, for a moment I thought it was O'Reilly's inner voice, because he's also a master at words manipulation - but remembering where this came from was good! Yeah, probably I'd react like Toby too, I see why his anger came out so quickly - nice job!!

[catheights]

I prided myself on the fact that no one could best me in a battle where the weapons were discourse and bullshit.

This is such a fantastic line. Excellent drabble. You get inside Beecher's head nicely, doing a wonderful job of capturing this moment in canon.