Comments | hardtime100: HT100 #51

rileyc in hardtime100

Apr 27, 2004 09:30

Back to NYE, shortly after the kiss...~Vulnerable ( Read more... )

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alinewrites April 27 2004, 10:14:25 UTC

Mmmmm.... Wonderful, wonderful... the description of their hands made me shiver. I love it!

rileyc April 27 2004, 18:58:59 UTC

Thanks, Aline. I love their hands too, so this should have been an easier challenge to meet. Glad it worked for you.

debaser28 April 27 2004, 10:54:30 UTC

Very nice image, Rebecca. Now I will spend a good amount of time imagining this scene.Thank you!:)

rileyc April 27 2004, 18:59:47 UTC

Thanks, Ana. There are probably worse things to have on your mind. ;)

catheights April 28 2004, 13:43:08 UTC

Beautiful writing! I love the image of Chris's hands moving over Toby as if he were covered in Braille. What a great visual that gives.

rileyc May 1 2004, 09:45:01 UTC

Thank you, Cat. I liked that line, so it's great to know it pulled up such a great visual. :)

lisacali April 30 2004, 10:23:51 UTC

So very nice, Rebecca. Lovely, lovely image.

rileyc May 1 2004, 09:45:59 UTC

Thanks, Lisa. Their hands, moving over each other, touching the scars they both bear, was the only thing that popped into my head. Glad it worked.