HT100 #48 - Group Therapy AND HT100 Challenge #40--Cunt

[jbfrancis2000]

Whoo-hoo!  I think I’ve had a neat ieda.  Double up on the challenges a particular drabble is responding to, therefore double the word count!  Logical, no? :D   215 words.

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“Tobias?”

He finally looked away from the cafeteria exit.  Hill had awkwardly finished his point, and though the room simmered with unspoken tension, Sister

Comments

Oooo Ow!

[engenda]

Ouch.

So spot on. I can just see the Toby sneer, you know, the one that reaches his eyes and makes them all nasty blue? That one.

Well done.

[fictionbya]

Oh wow, I love getting to hear him say everything he doesn't *say*. Just fantastic!

[rowanfairchild]

Heh, I'll buy your wordcount logic. Especially if you're going to use it to do something neat like this. Very nice evoking of that scene and that moment, and what Beecher might have really been thinking about the good Sister. *g*

[rileyc]

Wow, good Beecher train of thought there.