Fic: The Bluff Is Called (Bleach)

[hardlyfatal]

So, er, yeah. Here's my Shunsui/Nanao smoochie piece. technoelfie and I decided to write different versions of the same theme-- Nanao takes Shunsui up on his kissy-face offer-- and I think they turned out well. Go read hers, too-- it's good.

Comments

[blackestfaery]

Really... I am this close to stalking you ^^

This was so sweet - the picture of Shunsui puckering his face like a fish was so vivid that I couldn't help but laugh. He would do it, I know he would - and seeing as how Nanao likes to thwart him in any way, I can see how she'd try to call his bluff.

Can I just say how glad I am she was wrong this time? Their dynamic was especially well done and I loved the ending. Very cozy and intimate.

As always, your fics are an inspiration - ShunsuixNanao love =)

[hardlyfatal]

Thank so much! I really appreciate your kind compliments :)

[starswing]

*bursts out laughing* Shunsui can try to be an artist all he likes, but poor Nanao! I really did adore their interaction, and I can SO see Nanao calling his bluff one day...ahh, my inner Shunsui/Nanao fangirl is satisfied.

[hardlyfatal]

Good! I'm glad you liked it :)

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you!

[findingfaramir]

This is adorable - I had a smile on my face the whole way through. ^_^ <-- like so.

"...lovely but regrettably repressed vice-captain."

I especially liked this line. Well done & I hope to see more!

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks! I certainly hope to write more for them, I love them together.

[_snoogans_]

You are such a good writer!!! You never ever take a single person out of character, and you make everything sound absolutely perfect!!! I always wish those two would get together...thank you for painting such a beautiful picture of what would happen between two very awesome characters. Much love and respect. ^_^

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks so much! I try really hard to keep everyone in character, I'm so happy it worked :)