Thanks to dear houses7177 and darling empressvesica for betaing. I still can't believe there wasn't more wrong with it than the tiny minor point Ves made! I am so cool.
That's three, yes?? My biggest problem, as I indicated in those cute little comments one can do in reviewing mode in Word, was the very unclear time shift between Ch. 2 and Ch.3. And it's fixed - with just three words. :D
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That's three, yes?? My biggest problem, as I indicated in those cute little comments one can do in reviewing mode in Word, was the very unclear time shift between Ch. 2 and Ch.3. And it's fixed - with just three words. :D
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