[Log] Sousuke Aizen, Ulquiorra Schiffer (Body Arc)

Aug 04, 2008 19:23

Title: Sins of the Father (Body Arc)
Characters: Aizen (formative), Ulquiorra (day_eight)
Timeline: April 1, 1950
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Even politicians need to be taught lessons.

Looks like dear old Fitz has finally developed a backbone. How nice for him. )

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some_scribbles August 5 2008, 04:34:13 UTC
Dan dun DAN! And the Body Arc starts.

Aizen is so CREEPY. 'It was Aizen who had carefully moulded the architect into the man he was today after all. Reliable, dependable and loyal Ulquiorra Schiffer was the perfect subordinate.' Gah!

Not to mention this: 'One dark, one light. One didn’t know how to smile, the other didn’t know how not to. Both were deadly in their own way and both would willingly give their lives for him if he asked them to. Sousuke sure knew how to pick them.' (It is SERIOUSLY NOT helping calm down Rangiku's mental accusations of Aizen's kidnapping and personal slave ring, Ling. ^^)

And Uqui employs the 'heir and spare' concept quite nicely. Poor Ulquiorra. He's so happy that he has a task and so glad to fulfill the responsibility. He needs more ice cream in his life. *nods* You do a great job with his subtle body language as well.

SO nicely done, you two. It reads so well and is a fascinating peek into the Concavos dynamics.

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formative August 6 2008, 01:07:41 UTC
Aizen would like me to point out that he objects to being called creepy. He says he's a benevolent and generous person who cares about... ::chokes:: Sorry, can't continue. XD

He should definitely avoid running into Rangiku in a dark alley. LOL

Day's Ulqui is really great and I look forward to moar interaction between those two.

Thank you for reading and leaving one of your amazing comments, Shira! ::smooches::

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day_eight August 9 2008, 01:46:07 UTC
I absolutely adore Ling's Aizen. Annnd, I think it's pretty evident that Ulquiorra does, too. *grin* He's so nice for being one of NYC's most dangerous men. Which... makes him that much creepier! I get torn between the "Aww, he's so awesome" and "Oh wow, he's scary."

And thanks for the compliment on Ulquiorra, Shira! Since he basically only has subtle body language, I really worry about portraying that in the right way.

I agree that he needs more ice cream. Unfortunately, the poor kid claims that he's far to busy to indulge in sweet treats. ;P

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lcpdragonslayer August 5 2008, 07:13:07 UTC
I have been following this log religiously.

I'm not as good as leaving comments like Shira above, so. Just wanted to say that - loved the contrast between Gin and Ulquiorra, and how they're so different but in the end all the same.

I guess I don't have much else to say. I liked this log. And anything else you guys write, really.

Oh and, no worries Ulqui. Gin knows exactly what thing and which place to go afterwards. ;D

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formative August 6 2008, 01:25:41 UTC
W00t!

Thank yooou, lcp! Comments are always luv. And the way Day and you write Gin and Ulqui was begging for it to be pointed out. <3

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day_eight August 9 2008, 01:48:10 UTC
Gin and Ulquiorra, the same? Surely not! Ulquiorra vehemently detests this statement. <3

I love anything that you and Ling write, as well. I'm just 100% Team Concavo, so I get a little sappy whenever our good ol' baddies get the chance to be wackily creepy together.

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calm_isolation August 5 2008, 19:53:52 UTC
Wow very nice!!! Wondered by the son got wacked LOL now I know!!

Very nice comparisons between Gin and Ulqu very very nice

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formative August 6 2008, 01:31:03 UTC
Yes, son dies cuz his dad's a dick. Sucks to be him, eh? XDDD

That comparison bit should be credited to day and lcp who write those two so brilliantly.

Thank you very much for reading! <3

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day_eight August 9 2008, 01:49:36 UTC
Ulquiorra doesn't understand why everyone keeps comparing him to Gin. He's rather perturbed.

Day, on the other hand, is absolutely delighted. ♥

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