The Function to Breathe - Edward/Jacob - Chapter Eighteen

[harboringsighs]

Title: The Function to Breathe, Chapter Eighteen
Fandom/Pairing: Twilight, Edward/Jacob, Slash
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3499
Genre: A little bit of everything - romance, humor, angst. The usual.
Disclaimer: Nothing about Twilight belongs to me what-so-ever. Meyer can keep it.
Warnings: um. TORTURE, IF YOU ARE SQUEAMISH YOU SHOULD SKIP PART OF THIS

Comments

[starry_nights88]

I just gotta say...

I didn't even get to read the last chapter yet!! I'll give you an actual review once I read both chapters! Keep up with the writing! Go! Go! Go! Give me more reason to procrastinate with my writing. xP

[harboringsighs]

ahhh fdlfj

[starry_nights88]

No, no. I'm procrastinating on everyone else's account. Really. I've been reading, and reading, and reading the past few days. But I'm starting to work on fanfiction now, promise.

though it's not an update to any of my fics, they're on hiatus until August 30th~

[harboringsighs]

...

SO WHAT IS IT

way to leave me hanging, jeez.

[lilangelz429]

:( Bella ewww.... She just makes things so awkward sometimes

Poor Seth!!! The vampire and him needs to get together and do a prison break!

[seamonkeyz27]

So great to see so many chapters being put up! I love this story and its going in a very interesting place. I feel bad for Seth... and Jacob.... oh and I dont like Shift anymore...:-(

Maybe I missed this-- but how come Seth doesnt phase?

[starry_nights88]

Shift is one sick fucker puppy. Poor Seth. Poor, poor Seth. I can't even comment on Jacob's lolz (knocking up Bella to break the imprint, really? -- But, SUCH a wonderfully Jake thing to say!) because of what that bastard did to Seth and the vampire, but mostly Seth because it's Seth!!

[micky_susu]

Why won't Clarissa talk.....I'm beginning to hate her.