i was listening to 'Please don't go'. when i read the lines "No…It can’t be…He took another step and look at the lifeless body left on the hospital bed.... ", i heard Jonghyun & Onew singing "It can't be, it can't be. Please don't leave me like this." Then my tears started streaming down my face.
the ending is so angsty. i always hoped that Jonghyun would come on time. Stupid Jonghyun, he never knew what he had until he lost it. He should have realized how important Onew was. If so, he would have got it back. T-T
however, i really like this <3 it's even greater than "Don't speak"
THAT IS A PERFECT SONG !!!! I better write it down to advice people listening to it while reading <3 omgosh i apologise for the angst here >.< I should have wrote a fluff for you ~ -sigh-
I guess he regretted not turning on his phone and know this earlier... Maybe it would end up as a happy ending ! okay is my fault he did not on his phone and not appearing before that people tends to realise other people's importance when he/she is gone...
aww really ;D thats great ~ Just take your time and focus on your studies :) this is like 3 chapters >.< the longest story I ever wrote in livejournal ! Thanks for commenting and all the help you provided for me !!! XD
don' feel sorry *hug* coz' I like angsty fanfics. It made me cried but I loved it <3 it's not your fault. it's Jonghyun's fault and now he get punishment.
don't worry, i will be free tomorrow so i may finished translating chapter 1 by tomorrow :D
This is heart breaking! At chapter 2 I was kind of mad at Jonghyun... But now I kind of pity him! and my poor cute Onew died T.T But all in all this Jongyu was great :3
-bows- THANKS :) Jonghyun did not mean it >.< I am the one who is at fault for this tragedy T.T he is totally devastated when he died... yeah jongyu is always great :) Thanks for commenting and support this fanfic all the way !!! ;D
fdfsj i pressed backspace and erased my previous comment OTL FHSDUIFHDHFFJIOAWJO /SOBBING SO HARD RN. WHY. ;___; but aside from my sobs, i really liked this (cept for the part where onew died T_T but tht just added onto the story) the way onews in denial and so in love, it really hurts /: i love, love, love how at the end, the roles change and jjong's the one saying 'don't go' cant help but feel like he deserved it OTL IM SORRY.
nah is okay :) ps: whats OTL? i am slow with short forms >.< omgosh i am so sorry it made you sobbb.... yeah quite sad that onew had to die...i am so evil.... some love just hurts so much *sniff sniff* YEAH ! i specially made that part and you noticed it <3 haha well kinda but not really xP i am sure he would visit him when he receive the news :) Thanks for commenting !!! ;D
ahh, OTL, at first i thought it was 'open to life' or something like LOL but it turned out to be another version of FML-ish thing its like a person on their hands and knees (plz dont think dirty LOL) not knowing wht to do O=head T=hands L=legs
hahahha i wont ;D I seen people use FML but dun really know what it stands for >.< sometimes i wonder if i am really a teenager or not... thanks ~ i learn a new word ;D
Oh gosh, I'm normally a silent reader, but this was absolutely beautiful in a dark way. . . I love that duet when they sing it too! On the last line of the story, I could totally hear them belting it out in my brain. lol! I teared up, no joke! <3!
I AM SORRY !!! *bows to apologise* REALLY? I am so honoured <3 kekeke I know, this is angst T.T YUP ! I wrote this for lightordark and she was listening to this song while reading ~ So I guess this is a perfect song for this story's ending ~ Please don't go match with the title <3 haha *hands over the box of tissue prepared at a side just incase* Thanks for reading !!! ;D
-continues to cry!- I can't accept your apology yet! xD LOL. I'm just kidding. Yep, yep. You're welcome. =] Thanks for writing it! <3 -nods- This is some serious angst right here. It's not always done right, but this was just. . .gah. I don't even know. Just angsty and beautiful and ironic and . . .-hugs you!- The absolutely perfect song! -takes the tissues- Thanks~ ;~;
I was hoping that Onew would suddenly wake up and smile with his usual goofy look, saying "Hey I'm not dead yet" or something HAHAHA :x
Anyway I was listening to the song while reading. I guess it makes this fic 2 times more angsty. I cried at the part that Jonghyun was reading the voice mails. And the hospital scene as well. Omg.
Really love how you wrote the story though. :D Thanks for sharing!
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i was listening to 'Please don't go'. when i read the lines "No…It can’t be…He took another step and look at the lifeless body left on the hospital bed.... ", i heard Jonghyun & Onew singing "It can't be, it can't be. Please don't leave me like this." Then my tears started streaming down my face.
the ending is so angsty. i always hoped that Jonghyun would come on time. Stupid Jonghyun, he never knew what he had until he lost it. He should have realized how important Onew was. If so, he would have got it back. T-T
however, i really like this <3 it's even greater than "Don't speak"
and i'll translate it soon xD
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THAT IS A PERFECT SONG !!!!
I better write it down to advice people listening to it while reading <3
omgosh i apologise for the angst here >.<
I should have wrote a fluff for you ~ -sigh-
I guess he regretted not turning on his phone and know this earlier...
Maybe it would end up as a happy ending !
okay is my fault he did not on his phone and not appearing before that
people tends to realise other people's importance when he/she is gone...
aww really ;D thats great ~
Just take your time and focus on your studies :)
this is like 3 chapters >.< the longest story I ever wrote in livejournal !
Thanks for commenting and all the help you provided for me !!! XD
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it's not your fault. it's Jonghyun's fault and now he get punishment.
don't worry, i will be free tomorrow
so i may finished translating chapter 1 by tomorrow :D
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At chapter 2 I was kind of mad at Jonghyun...
But now I kind of pity him!
and my poor cute Onew died T.T
But all in all this Jongyu was great :3
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Jonghyun did not mean it >.<
I am the one who is at fault for this tragedy T.T
he is totally devastated when he died...
yeah jongyu is always great :)
Thanks for commenting and support this fanfic all the way !!! ;D
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FHSDUIFHDHFFJIOAWJO /SOBBING SO HARD RN.
WHY. ;___;
but aside from my sobs, i really liked this (cept for the part where onew died T_T but tht just added onto the story) the way onews in denial and so in love, it really hurts /:
i love, love, love how at the end, the roles change and jjong's the one saying 'don't go'
cant help but feel like he deserved it OTL IM SORRY.
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ps: whats OTL? i am slow with short forms >.<
omgosh i am so sorry it made you sobbb....
yeah quite sad that onew had to die...i am so evil....
some love just hurts so much *sniff sniff*
YEAH ! i specially made that part and you noticed it <3 haha
well kinda but not really xP
i am sure he would visit him when he receive the news :)
Thanks for commenting !!! ;D
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but it turned out to be another version of FML-ish thing
its like a person on their hands and knees (plz dont think dirty LOL) not knowing wht to do
O=head T=hands L=legs
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I seen people use FML but dun really know what it stands for >.<
sometimes i wonder if i am really a teenager or not...
thanks ~ i learn a new word ;D
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-CRIES!- ;~;
Oh gosh, I'm normally a silent reader, but this was absolutely beautiful in a dark way. . .
I love that duet when they sing it too! On the last line of the story, I could totally hear them belting it out in my brain. lol! I teared up, no joke! <3!
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REALLY? I am so honoured <3 kekeke
I know, this is angst T.T
YUP ! I wrote this for lightordark and she was listening to this song while reading ~
So I guess this is a perfect song for this story's ending ~
Please don't go match with the title <3 haha
*hands over the box of tissue prepared at a side just incase*
Thanks for reading !!! ;D
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Yep, yep. You're welcome. =] Thanks for writing it! <3
-nods- This is some serious angst right here. It's not always done right, but this was just. . .gah. I don't even know. Just angsty and beautiful and ironic and . . .-hugs you!-
The absolutely perfect song! -takes the tissues- Thanks~ ;~;
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no problem xD -hugs back- kekeke
is their duet xD and they sound perfect together <3 haha
Thanks again XD
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I was hoping that Onew would suddenly wake up and smile with his usual goofy look, saying "Hey I'm not dead yet" or something HAHAHA :x
Anyway I was listening to the song while reading. I guess it makes this fic 2 times more angsty. I cried at the part that Jonghyun was reading the voice mails. And the hospital scene as well. Omg.
Really love how you wrote the story though. :D
Thanks for sharing!
/continues crying... Onew ah... T___T
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I am so evil :( and yeah he should totally do that.
i should have wrote like that
It is kinda their song since they sang duet ~
That is the reason for the more angsty >.<
*frantically wiping away the tears again*
REALLY *touched and bows*
*hands over the box of tissue*
Thanks for commenting !!!! ;D
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