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[happylantern]

learn to play the saw
learn to play the saw
learn to play the saw
jump off a cliff

Comments

[telethons]

good ideas

[penguin_boy]

wrong order

[starbiter]

It'll scan better if you change the last line to "jump off of a cliff"

[happylantern]

I've been trying to understand what this means for like an hour

[starbiter]

Uh.. "scan" is a poetry term.. look up "scansion".

Basically, what I meant that the rhythm of the last line would match the three lines above it if you added the extra word.

HOWEVER...

As a poem... the concept of jumping off a cliff is well-matched by the line's abruptness/shortness/the fact that it isn't identical to the first three lines above it.

I dunno. I like meter.

[telethons]

I IM'd my group officers to tell them not to delete me if they got a nasty message about me being racist.

[2:16] Allen Kerensky: No one named Kristauf anything has contacted me. Not to worry though, in D&D you have to be racist: are you human? an elf? a dwarf? a half-orc? hehehe