Drabble Series: Is 17 Legal? Let's Hope Kiddies!

Jun 13, 2010 23:56



Drabble 16 of 20:  Monkeys (Sort of Sequel/Prequel to AU)

Pairing:  Brian/Ringo

Disclaimer: I do not own the The Beatles. Any events here are purely fictional.

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If you, the reader, had somehow managed to find a drunk and aged Ringo Starr (real name Richard Starkey) one ( Read more... )

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GAW.. tssktssktssk June 14 2010, 12:16:14 UTC
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD;

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Re: GAW.. tssktssktssk June 14 2010, 12:16:54 UTC
HA VIRGINITY.

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Ahhh, sorry? happyemo777 June 14 2010, 14:36:10 UTC
*Hides under a rock* Please don't kill me, please. I didn't mean to make you use the smiley of unhappiness, really! Don't kill me.

And oh shi- Pedobear. *Hides under two rocks*

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Re: Ahhh, sorry? tssktssktssk June 15 2010, 12:58:46 UTC
IT'S OKAY.
I LAV EET.

LOLOLOL That's my murkmurk face.

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georgehloverr June 15 2010, 01:18:44 UTC
Wow, that was really good :]

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happyemo777 June 15 2010, 09:04:11 UTC
Thank you, that's so nice of you to say!

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happyemo777 June 15 2010, 09:07:34 UTC
Oh, I'm really glad you like it! Honestly, I was kind of weary of doing the whole time jumping thing because it felt messy to me at best but I'm happy that you took pleasure in reading this!

And I agree, poor Brian! Poor guy had such a rich history. And for it to end so soon in his young life. John (I think) was right: They were screwed the moment they found out he was dead. :C

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eppieblack June 16 2010, 14:23:38 UTC
Oh my. I love the way you write this pairing, so much. And I'm so sad for Brian that he never climbed his way out of the state you left him in the previous drabble...Poor Ringo as well. I thought you might give them a happy ending, but so hard to find, yes?

It took me awhile to decide how I felt about this one. Then I was listening to a classic rock station and "Honey Don't" came on and caught my thoughts off guard. Then I thought, oh it's just like that, Happy Emo's new drabble. I'll never listen to Honey Don't the same way again, it about made me cry.

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happyemo777 June 17 2010, 08:57:43 UTC
Oh, I'm sorry that I made you so upset! I didn't mean to make you cry when you remembered it and listened to the song.

I was honestly going to give it this one story a happy ending but then I looked back and went 'no' because I felt like it was too plastic and rewrote it. Obviously went overboard on the attempts to make it more...er...gritty.

And I'm also sorry for taking forever to reply, I'm not the best person when it comes to juggling my time on the internet.

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eppieblack June 17 2010, 13:37:42 UTC
I was actually pretty glad to find hidden depths in "Honey Don't". If your favorite pairing is Brian/anyone, ahhh you're a glutton for punishment anyway.

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