Good Fences - Chapter Eight

Jul 15, 2011 16:35



And here you have it, all wrapped up. Hope you enjoyed it, and thank you for every single review and kind word.

Chapter Eight... )

smallville fic, good fences

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liselle2010 July 15 2011, 23:12:10 UTC
I am so sorry to see this end. This was such a wonderful piece and I just loved the intereaction between the two, they were wonderful. The whole thing was wonderful!

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happycabbage75 July 21 2011, 15:22:12 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading something from a newbie!

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happycabbage75 July 21 2011, 15:26:28 UTC
I do love Oliver when he's scary smart and willing to crush his enemies, always with a twinkle in his eye :) I think it comes from watching Clark be wishy-washy for the last ten years. I just wanna put the smackdown on the bad guys, instead of talking and trying to understand where they're coming from. Smite 'em, Ollie!

Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it!

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nivieniv July 16 2011, 01:11:43 UTC
So sad to see this end. You've done such a great job writing this and keeping the characters true to themselves. I absolutely love the insight we've gotten into Chloe's thoughts through this fic, and I'm in awe with you're characterization of Oliver. I feel I've gotten to understand the characters a little more through your writing, and I thank you for that =)

I loved the ending, this whole fic has been so exciting, fun, and filled with chemistry between Chloe and Oliver. Thank you so much for sharing!

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happycabbage75 July 21 2011, 15:28:10 UTC
Very glad you enjoyed it. In truth, I'm always worried that I haven't got a clue what Chloe's actually thinking, so this was an effort to put myself in her shoes.

Thanks for reading!

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chlollie_4ever July 16 2011, 13:20:05 UTC
This is one of the best stories i ever read... thank you so much for writing and sharing with us...

I love the season 9 chlollie moments... they were the best ones and it's wonderful to read stories that fill the holes they left...

Congrats for this and i hope to read a lot more stories from you...

:D

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happycabbage75 July 21 2011, 15:29:36 UTC
Thank you very much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Season 9 is one of my faves and we didn't get nearly enough Ollie/Chloe time, so it's up to us to make it happen :)

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mystic_ri96 July 16 2011, 19:34:29 UTC
"I wasn't finished," he bit out. "While you've been threatening me or making demands or whatever you think you've been doing, I've been busy too." All of Oliver's attention was focused on Moretti, a barely leashed fury in his expression. "Your house is mortgaged." He pointed to the goons behind Moretti. "So are theirs. So is virtually every home owned by your employees, from your top lieutenants on down. I've bought up every one of those loans. Your businesses, your legitimate ones anyway, have taken out various loans through various banks. Some of your businesses are on rented property. I have bought every bit of that property and I have bought every one of those loans." Oliver leaned forward in his chair. "If you so much as touch one hair on the head of one of my people, I will raise the rent through the roof on every one of those businesses and I will call in every one of those loans.""I also own the loans on their homes. I own their college loans, personal loans, their medical bills, their credit cards. I own their car loans. I ( ... )

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happycabbage75 July 21 2011, 15:32:09 UTC
Very glad you enjoyed it and glad you liked Ollie in all of his CEO glory putting the smackdown on the bad guy. Thanks for reading!

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