IN OUR EYES

[hanub]

In our eyes

Pairing: Edward/Jacob
Rating: R, for language.
Warning: Slash, and a bit of OC. English is not my mother tongue and this isn't betaed, so, for every mistake that surely is, I apologize.
Disclaimer: The twilight series and its characters belong to Ms. Mayer.

Chapter 4

A last minute reflect was all he needed.

A last minute reflect was the thing

Comments

[animaven]

Have you considered spacing between paragraphs. It would make this an easier read.