IN OUR EYES CHAPTER THREE

[hanub]

Title: IN OUR EYES Chapter Three
Author: Hanub
Paring: Edward/Jacob
Rating: R
Warnings: A little bit of AU
Summary: The more we think things, more questions appear, and more certain we are.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Twilight characters, they belong to Stephanie Meyer. No money is being made from this.
AN: So here's the next part, I hope that

Comments

[raingoddess2040]

Very interesting.... I hope the Volturi don't cause too much trouble for them. Is this going to be strictly Edward/Jacob as in Edward topping, because the way you set up before had them seeming more equal. I wouldn't mind if it was like that, I'm just wondering.

Thank you

[hanub]

Yes, is going to be Edward/Jacob, for some reason, the Edward in my mind always comes as a dominant character, while Jacob is more in touch with his emotions, therefore, needs more protection. I wanted them to be equal at the beginning, because that's how it should be, regardless of who is topping. Thanks for taking the time, in each chapter, to post you review, they been really helpful ^///^

[saiyoran]

YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!
That is just simply....cruel, how can you leave us like that!!
LOL Very interesting story, hope to read you soon...and please for the love of Vampireas and Lycans...update soon.

Working on it!! ^^

[hanub]

Thanks, I'm glad you found it interesting, I'm not really gifted in the cliffhanger ability, so I hope I did it ok. I promise, I'm already working in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing! ^^

[dark_wing21]

Eh-he, I have some grammar corrections, hope you don't mind it.

'to deal with and extremely and potentially' -> to deal with an extremely and potentially

'He killed must of the vampires' -> He killed most of the vampires

And the name is Carlisle not Carlise.

Great chapter and a cliffhanger, too. I really like the way Jacob's friends hiding behind a couch for fear of him. That's hilarious. And the last word, 'pounced'. Kyaaa~. I love predatory Edward.

Thanks

[hanub]

WOW, you really now how to make a critic, first I felt bad because of my grammar mistakes, and then you lift me up, and left me feeling I can do it better... I'll try, but English is not my mother language, so there's probably gonna be more of these mistakes. I'll try harder to identify them; thanks ^////^

[agape_eternal]

Liking this :)

[hanub]

Thank you!! ^___^

[diosa_hikari]

your fic is beautiful. I have not missed any of the chapters, I'm sorry for leaving comments so far.

please continue writing, you do so well!

history is one of the best I've read, I have fully attentive to your updates XD XD