we were like pomegranates (2/2)

Dec 12, 2015 16:57

we were like pomegranates
~11,300w; pg-13 (woozi-centric, friendship!woozi/hoshi and woozi/s.coups)
jihoon tries to navigate his life as a second year art major.
( part one)

it's bitter and dry, like the juice of a pomegranate. )

pairing: woozi/s.coups, fandom: seventeen, #twoshot, rating: pg-13, #kisoap, pairing: woozi/hoshi

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mellowsound December 31 2015, 15:01:49 UTC
omg i loved this <333

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kaleid_scopic January 20 2016, 05:25:32 UTC
hi, I just want to say that this was beyond awesome. I love how you characterized everyone and how you wrote jicheol's relationship, it made me squeal and flail a lot from the pain and it all started from this line all the way throughout the fic:

Jihoon never took the phrase actions speak louder than words to heart, because Seungcheol's actions were his words: the way he smiled softly when he spoke about his family or the new song he loved, furrowing his brows when he asked Jihoon if he was okay after falling asleep in class, eyes wet when they graduated high school and whenever they made up from some stupid fight that spiraled out of control.

Also I literally (and I mean literally literally) cried even though hormone might take a role in that too

thank you for writing this! it was so beautiful I'm probably going deeper into the diamond life after reading this :')

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ext_2065216 March 18 2016, 06:51:59 UTC
I was wandering around looking for a Jicheol fic and came across your story. I just want to say that it was a great story, I just love how you potrayed Jihoon emotion and everything else. The story didn't end up with Jicheol being together as i wish, but i still find the story amazing and feel the need to post a comment to tell you that.

And this beautiful fic deserves more atttention, just saying :)).

Anyway, thank you for writing this great piece of story. <3

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