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contagio(us)

Jan 20, 2013 00:21

contagio(us)
1,940w; pg-13 (seungah/kiseop)
they wanted storms to shake the earth, so they waited to hear the thunder.

( they lay under an ocean of sheets, off-white and tangling through their limbs. these sheets smell like them, that warm smell of worn down things that need to be replaced. )

pairing: seungah/kiseop, rating: pg-13, fandom: u-kiss, fandom: rainbow, #kisoap, #oneshot

Comments 5

wintercreamed January 20 2013, 09:51:02 UTC

spot ;-;

wintercreamed January 21 2013, 06:45:45 UTC

I was just halfway through the piece and I already went 'this deserves to be in my favorite fic list just because.' and I was reading this in class haha because it was too cold to listen to the prof anyway

I am one of your biggest fans you know. I told you that and okay here's some spazz for you: kasjfhksjfhkldjalkjdaklsjdasklhflsfjEJLSAFSLKJFKASDF OMG ASDFLASJFKLJSF LOL ILY

Now Sapphy, I love love reading your stuff and all the metaphors in there I mean who doesn't like prose this way I know I do. I can't explain (gurrl i can't explain what i feel) exactly how this makes me feel; it's warm (despite here being super cold I'm freezing) and it's what I like most about fics. The flow is flawless btw, and I like how you chop your ideas and connect them with the next. THIS style makes me cry at your perfection go away ( ... )

kisoap March 10 2013, 08:02:25 UTC

I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO RESPOND TO THIS COMMENT AND I'VE BEEN TRYING TO BUT.
i'll just sob now. and keep this in my pocket forever. ♥

pearlfuchsia January 23 2013, 07:53:34 UTC

wow I've been so slow in commenting on things lately and idek why BUT THIS WAS SO GOOD AND I LOVE IT A LOT UGH HOW DO YOU WRITE

I love all the little details you include here, from their apartment to the little habits they've developed in their relationship and it all just makes it feel more real. You make it sound so natural it's crazy. And you cover the ups and downs and it feels like an emotional roller coaster lkahfkdfhajlkfg. Perfect angst with hints of romance ;w; ♥

(theirs. apartment where nothing works and the neighbors hate them, the off-white sheets, dials on the radio and heat in the car, parking meter, the newly painted park bench. theirs.

the rain pelts down. him, her. theirs. washes away the hints of them, leaving nothing in their place.

and their worlds stop for just a moment to watch the sky begin again.)

I REALLY LOVED THAT PART it's beautiful and hits me right in the kokoro ;A; ♥

/bows down to your greatness

kisoap March 10 2013, 08:03:49 UTC

NO *pulls you out of bow*
lskdghaskjdf THE REAL QUESTION IS, HOW DO /YOU/ WRITE YOU FLAWLESS AUTHOR?
(feels like elmo asking this question sobs) ♥