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hansbekhart

Supernatural fic - The Last Day (Sam/Dean, NC-17)

Jul 08, 2007 14:19

Title: The Last Day
Author: hansbekhart
Rating: NC-17
Summary: One year ago, Dean Winchester made a deal with the devil.
Notes: dedicated to Itani, for her amazing generosity in the Sweet Charity auction. Plot spoilers for the second season finale.

( He’d been trying for three hundred and sixty three days to tell Dean that he was going to save him, and he was sick of saying it. )

supernatural, fanfiction

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hansbekhart July 8 2007, 23:45:04 UTC

HEEHEE. Thank you!

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hansbekhart July 8 2007, 23:45:20 UTC

I kinda hated myself too, by the end of this. Thank you so much!

tabaqui July 8 2007, 22:45:11 UTC

And then...dear gods!!!
The image of Sam crouched in the dirt under the house, crying...and Dean's just watching him....

Gah.

Oh, boys...

One teeny thing. He sneezes as he cries, snot running down his cheeks,
On his *cheeks*? That's kind of...weird. Tears, yes, but... You know?

hansbekhart July 8 2007, 23:45:49 UTC

Huh, that DOES sound weird. I changed it to "face," thank you for pointing it out - and thank you for reading!

causeways July 8 2007, 22:49:03 UTC

I love the domesticity of it, and the way Sam's still clinging desperately to Dean and trying to believe that it's going to be okay, he's going to get Dean out of the thing, even though Dean's telling him that it's going to be okay and meaning it in a completely different sense, that the demon's coming to collect for him and he's made his peace with it. *clings to them both* I loved the timestamp format, too -- especially since it's Sam's POV. I feel like Sam (especially your Sam here) would be hyperaware of every moment of the clock ticking down, much more so than Dean would be.

hansbekhart July 8 2007, 23:48:40 UTC

Thank you so much! My main prompt was something after the second season finale, and my head just wouldn't let go of the idea of what Dean would actually want, for his last day - and what that would do to Sam. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

wishforhome July 8 2007, 22:58:17 UTC

Oh, god damn you. You made me cry.

I don't know what to say. I hate you a little right now. This is incredible.

hansbekhart July 8 2007, 23:49:21 UTC

I love you though :D. **hugs** Thank you for reading, dude!

wishforhome July 9 2007, 00:00:29 UTC

One little tiny note, though -- somewhere near the beginning you have "then" instead of "than".

hansbekhart July 9 2007, 00:08:38 UTC

Ahhh, shit. It was pointed out to me in Skinnybone that that's a very bad habit of mine. Thanks for pointing it out.