Play Time in The Bath - Part 1 - Ohmiya

Feb 21, 2016 19:19

So I'm back and I'm alive!
I'm planning on posting a lot of my postable fics over the next few days. (She says)

First in my list as promised is this one!
Had it ready for months but not wanted to post it, missed Ohmiya anniversary so this is kind of for that!


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naoki_hikari February 21 2016, 21:31:19 UTC
I don't know why but I can't stop laughing while reading the fic. *red face*

Thanks! :D

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hannahkins93 February 22 2016, 12:53:48 UTC
I giggled a lot while writing it.

It's a pervy fanfic that took me a while to get this far cos it's getting a little steamy in the next bit.

I'm hoping part 2 works out just as well now.

Glad you like it! :D

Thanks! :3

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gambitsfox February 22 2016, 04:31:12 UTC
Holy shit! What a cliffhanger! Your really leaving the boys hang? For how long? Well, they just better not get wrinkly before you get back to them......lol. : )

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hannahkins93 February 22 2016, 12:55:32 UTC
Haha!
Nah it's like I've stopped time!
Just need to get part 2 written up and I'll post it asap!

Glad you like it though. Was one of my first to write.

:D

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jade_lil February 22 2016, 11:50:25 UTC
wowza :D

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hannahkins93 February 22 2016, 12:51:28 UTC
I think I almost screamed when I saw your comment!

You are one of my favourite fanfic writers and to see you've read and commented on my fanfic has just made my day!

I was in a horrible mood only a minute ago and now I have a massive smile again!

Thank you!!!

Please come back for part 2! :D

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jade_lil February 22 2016, 17:36:20 UTC
oh my god, are you serious?

oh and I definitely will :D I hope you keep that massive smile all day long, then :D

thanks for the hotness that is this fic, btw <3

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hannahkins93 February 22 2016, 20:21:43 UTC
Yes. Very. :D

Smile still happily plastered on my face :D

You are very welcome!
I loved writing this one! <3

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vsho February 22 2016, 16:33:30 UTC
damn .. ohmiya so hot <3 ... i'm so urge to read the second part ...
thanks and gambarre for second atsuii session <3

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hannahkins93 February 22 2016, 16:42:35 UTC
I know! Cold showers are needed. Haha!

The second part is currently just notes and a basic frame.
But it gets hotter. I promise!

I just need to get my perverted and dirty mind to help me write it up.

I'm also working on 3 other fics so it might be a while.

I have more hot stuff on the way (Plus a special Ohmiya drabble!)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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lexisegovia December 9 2016, 17:05:53 UTC
Hahah! gomen! while i was reading this my mind is running wild making me giggle a lot haha! but really, It's good although a bit too steamy :)

I like how you've structured it and how you easily describe it make it easier for readers to truly imagine it :)

I'm not really much into these types but i can say that its really good and your cliffhanger is just! ARGH! can i wait for the 2nd part? hehe

I would love to read it :)

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hannahkins93 December 9 2016, 17:22:01 UTC
Ahh! Sorry if it was too much! >///< I do love making these fics hot! Haha! I am still working on part 2 but I promise to have it done soon!

Thank you for reading! :D

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lexisegovia December 9 2016, 17:23:52 UTC
I can fully understand hehe :) like i said its good although my preference is different from yours but it's really interesting (^_^). I look forward to your update. Please don't rush it too much, I'm willing to wait :)

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