Yes Sir Part Five

Oct 03, 2011 20:25

Title: Yes Sir Part Five
Author: hannah_chapter
Pairing: Belldom
Rating: PG
Summary: AU. Victorian England. Matthew is the son of a lord, Dominic is a young and innocent servant: "The moment Matthew laid eyes on the boy, he knew he had to have him."
Feedback: Makes me do the dance of joy.
Disclaimer: Fake as fake could be.

Dominic kneels beside his master ( Read more... )

yes sir

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ashamedbliss October 3 2011, 19:55:21 UTC
Dom is so cute just looking after Matthew, and even Lord Bellamy approves xD

but... Paul and Lady Bellamy... what fucking fuckers D: gah. I hope Matt can sort them out

(and Matt would take Dom to Paris asdfghjkl that is too cute!)

(also, the thought of an Emily Bellamy amuses me and always has xD)

LOVED THIS :33333 <3333333333333

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hannah_chapter October 5 2011, 11:57:56 UTC
*hugs* Thanks! Yeah, Matt will take Dom everywhere. I just wanted to name Matt's sisters after two of the Bronte sisters - and I've always really liked the name Emily :) - I didn't think of how Emily Bellamy would sound when said out loud! *shrug* I suppose I could change her name, but LJ is such a bitch with editing now, I just can't be bothered.

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ashamedbliss October 5 2011, 12:20:06 UTC
no, no, don't change it! i realised they were named after the Brontes, haha. And I only know that it sounds funny because I've thought of it, lol

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hannah_chapter October 5 2011, 12:36:38 UTC
Fair enough, I'll keep it as it is (I love Wuthering Heights!). Anyway, if I did try and change it, I'd have to spend ages separating out a big block of text into paragraphs again, which is a massive pain in the arse.

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gripyoutight October 3 2011, 20:03:49 UTC
I love how you taken this story and it's just grown. It's so well down and a joy to read. Thanks for the update.

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hannah_chapter October 5 2011, 12:00:14 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, it's funny, this story just grew out of a quick line of dialogue in a completely different story and then it became its own thing. And it's so much fun to write!

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stefanyeah October 3 2011, 20:04:48 UTC
You're giving him a lot of morphine here. Be careful, Matteh-boy. :P

but life was easier when he did not have to take so much time and trouble over his appearance
Is this really Dominic we're talking about? lol

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hannah_chapter October 5 2011, 12:04:32 UTC
I suppose I am, but the Victorians were really into their morphine (and their arsenic and their strychnine), they even gave their children laudanum sweets to shut them up - and it certainly did that.

LOL, I'm sure RL Dom would be shocked at the idea of not fussing over his appearance, but this version of Dom used to do lots of messy jobs so he never worried too much about his grooming.

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stefanyeah October 5 2011, 20:47:45 UTC
That they were. Or opium. :P
Oh gosh… the things people did in the past. Makes me wonder how the next century will be looking down at us…

haha, true, true. ^.^

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muse_manticore October 3 2011, 20:05:23 UTC
Awww Poor Matthew, at least Dominic is looking after him.

I loved this chapter, so many little secrets revealed.

&hearts :)

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hannah_chapter October 5 2011, 12:05:30 UTC
Thanks, yes, I wanted to get into Matthew's backstory, why he came home, why he's so rude to his mum.

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engel_sehnsucht October 3 2011, 20:20:43 UTC
Aww, Dom looking after Matt is really sweet. :3 But Paul and Matt's mother... grrr. D:

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hannah_chapter October 5 2011, 12:09:44 UTC
He is a sweetie, isn't he? and Matt is lucky to have him when he's got such unpleasant people in his family.

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