Fic: The Old Building 5/?

[hanily]

Title: The Old Building 5/?
Characters: Ianto, Jack and Gwen
Summary: “he felt a soft caress on his face and a voice whispering Ianto.”
Spoilers: "Exit Wounds" and a teeny one for “Countrycide”

Disclaimer: I don't own them… But a girl can want, right?

A/N: Totally un-Betaed, so all mistakes are mine.

Comments

[jackieville]

Such a beautiful story! You're sweeping me off my feet despite my worry for Ianto. *is enthralled*

[hanily]

Don't be worried for Ianto I'll keep him safe *g*

[gkbgood]

Wonderful. I feel all swept up along with Ianto. But unlike Ianto I'm worried. Hurry Jack and Gwen, and you too.

Can't wait for the next part.

[hanily]

Thank you! :)

[missthingsplace]

Wonderful chapter, you have me hooked!

[candybree]

I just caught up and am loving it!!!
Poor Jack losing his Ianto. I hope they find a way to get him home soon!!
Great update!!!

[badly_knitted]

Ooooh, lovely chapter, very nice descriptions of the house and I love Ianto having trouble finding the water! Poor lamb, mind all addled by the concussion! I'm sure he would have igured it out otherwise :)
Mary has me a bit worried (her brothers too, of course) coming across all sweet and innocent, but she's mesmerising Ianto in a rather unnatural way - although I suppose that could at least partly due to the concussion.
Weird house, at least in Jack and Gwen's time - sort of reminds me of one of those fairground funhouses, or your typical haunted horror building where rooms move around and you can wander for hours, never going in the same room twice! In short, creepy!
I love the fact you're making it all up as you go along! Makes it even more fun - so looking forward to whatever you come up with next, but I do hope Jack and Gwen will find Ianto before he does anything silly! Or maybe I don't... *G* Heeee! *bounces happily off to get breakfast*

[hanily]

Thanks! I've already writted the next chapter, so its just a matter of posting it.. And re-reading it because I did write it at 1 o clock last night XD