The Old Building 4/?

[hanily]

A/N: This chapter came about after something badly_knitted said in a comment and it just kind of spiralled into this chapter. so this chapter is dedicated to you badly_knitted, partly for all the delightful long comments you leave! 

Everyone enjoy please!

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Jack moved through the shadows, gun drawn. He

Comments

[emyrldlady]

I'm intrigued!

[jackieville]

*is enthralled* This story rocks my world and I love it!

[eleni81]

Damn! What is going on here? I don't like the way Ianto finds that woman attractive! You better keep him safe missy!

[hanily]

I promise he will be kept mildy unharmed... :)

[missthingsplace]

Ooooh .... looking forward to more.

[badly_knitted]

Dedicated to me? Awww, shucks *blushes and grins* Thankyou!
And AAAAARRRGGGHHH! Jack's falling through floors and dying, Gwen's feet have a mind of their own (always did think she was a bit odd) and Ianto's been sucked into the past and into the clutches of Mary (hopefully no relation to Tosh's heart-eating Mary, although I'm not sure I trust this one's motives either)and her brothers! And he's concussed, so not thinking straight! :S I'm officially worried! Especially as he's already smitten with her. Eeeep! Can't wait for the next chapter - except that I have to!
I'm going to have to be all stalkery and lurk around your journal!

[hanily]

*G* I'm really glad you and everyone is enyoing it. As I've said I've never written anything like this before or anything multichaptered. I'm just literally making it up as I go along. I haven't even wrote the next chapter yet, but I think I'll start it now :)