LJIdol: 3 Strikes - Week 1 - "Black Rainbow"

Feb 07, 2022 20:29



“That’s the last one right there. Then we’re done.”

Blake looked down at the legalese that covered the page in small print. A million words reviewed a thousand times by a hundred attorneys in order to make sure that there were no mistakes, no omissions, no recourse. His hand trembled as he scrawled in the space that said “Patient Signature” at the ( Read more... )

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roina_arwen February 10 2022, 14:52:23 UTC
Very intriguing! I hope we find out more about Blake in the future, to see what happens to him.

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pixiebelle February 10 2022, 20:24:11 UTC
Intriguing, and left me with wanting to know more about Blake’s decision.

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static_abyss February 11 2022, 23:49:00 UTC
I love the emotion in this and all the questions at the end of each section that brought it all together. Well done!

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marlawentmad February 13 2022, 02:28:46 UTC
This narrative really pulls you along, eager to each new section. This really plucks at the empathy strings.

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d0gs February 13 2022, 15:07:26 UTC
This really had me invested from the first lines and left me wanting to know more about Blake!

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