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[dairygirl]

Excellent parallel construction with HBP and yet, a variation that is original. Draco's POV was wonderfully done--dealing with the pressure of his new role with the Dark Lord, denying and understanding this new life with him and his attraction to Harry. The mixed up emotions, the ups and downs and the damn tenacious baby were great elements. And you gave us a happy ending to boot. The only thing I wanted more was for the story to go on!

[hanfics]

Thank you!

The only thing I wanted more was for the story to go on!

It's not over yet. Watch this space! :)

[wook77]

This was wonderfully done! I like how Draco and Harry continue to snip at each other. You do a great job integrating HPB and morphing it into a different story. I loved how you used certain situations to really illustrate that parallel.

The last two lines show so much hope.

I especially liked Draco's reactions through the entire thing. He has a few snarky one liners and thoughts. It makes him much more IC.

Thanks for sharing! I'll look forward to more stories from you!

[akahannah]

Wow, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[ravenpan]

*weeps* that was absolutely beautiful. Some of the parts in this story really reminded me of my first pregnancy, right up through waking up after the c-section. Such a beautiful story! *memories*

[akahannah]

Wow! Thank you! :)

[silverrangel]

I would say something more, but I'm a bit choked up at the moment.

Beautiful. Just, just--completely and utterly heartbreaking.

n’t you get it?” Potter asks, as Draco brushes a dusting of broken glass from his sheets. “I DON’T CARE.. Not about you, not about any of this.”

*bawls some more*

[akahannah]

Aww, I'm sorry I made you cry. But so glad you enjoyed it!

[siren_mage]

Oh. My. God. The best mpreg fic I've ever read ever. Also the best HBP/post-HBP fic I've read ever. I think it's nice to see a quality author take an overdone cliche of a plot-line and make it something fresh, new, and impossibly plausible. It was all very in character, heart-wrenching, and absolutely beautiful. Just . . . gah. I'm incoherent. I think this is one of my favorite fics ever, and I totally mean that. ^.^

[akahannah]

You've made my day, my week and possibly my year. Thank you for leaving such a lovely review! :)

[siren_mage]

pfft, I speak only the truth. ^.^ I just went back and reread it and I sent it off to a friend to read as well. I love this fic so much. Is it true a sequel may pop up?

[akahannah]

:) Yes, it is true, though it's still very much at the ideas and notes stage at the moment. It will be a while, but I am working on it. Honest.