Comments | handstil: Owen's Poem

handstil

Owen's Poem

Mar 03, 2008 18:53

Look, I'm an apple
and my hair is a green leaf

I'm a human
inside an apple suit

charp charp

charp

Scorpions are so quiet

Maybe it was
cake

What farted.

lol, owen

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everette1_ March 4 2008, 03:04:55 UTC

I can see his indexed name, now.

handstil March 4 2008, 03:07:00 UTC

I told him he should write a book of them and he said it will be "rated E, for everyone."

wedeconstruct March 4 2008, 03:40:33 UTC

Too Fucking Cute. I love your son! Ha.

everette1_ March 4 2008, 03:56:07 UTC

Tell him I'll have his book in the Berning Archive, and I'll want my First Edition copy autographed.
Make that, books.

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becauseshewas March 4 2008, 03:06:28 UTC

LOL AMAZING

handstil March 4 2008, 03:10:07 UTC

He's whistling through the space where his tooth used to be. It's like living with a crazy person! haha

becauseshewas March 4 2008, 03:11:43 UTC

Hey if he's inspired ask him to write about chubby wolf, I'll include it in my EP lol

cornered_ego March 4 2008, 03:11:56 UTC

Step aside all other poets!

LOVE it!

At risk of giving him a complex nosrialleon March 4 2008, 03:13:06 UTC

That was GENIUS.

Re: At risk of giving him a complex handstil March 4 2008, 18:09:10 UTC

It was really funny because he wrote that and we went "AWESOME!" and so he started writing more and I think we ruined him by laughing and saying how great it was. He started trying to hard to be funny. Happens to the best of us! haha

selsin March 4 2008, 03:16:01 UTC

i hope school never beats this awesomeness out of him. i've seen it so many times with kids. they become empty robots!!! owen is awesome, i love this poem so much. ahahahha

handstil March 4 2008, 18:09:53 UTC

I know, I know.
I was thinking that if he wrote that at school they might tell him it was "inappropriate" or some such other BULLSHIT. :(