Onlooker [Oneshot]

Feb 05, 2011 00:17

Title: Onlooker
Author: Ani
Rating: PG
Pairings: Chiitaro, Yamajima
Summary: Chinen had an accident.
Disclaimer: I don't own JE
Dedication: For Eien's candyapplegirls birthday :) HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY <3

It was supposed to be perfect. )

fanfiction: one-shot, arioka daiki, oc: chinen saya, p: yamajima, yamada ryosuke, morimoto ryutaro, chinen yuuri, yabu kota, nakajima yuuto, yaotome hikaru, takaki yuya, p: chiitaro, inoo kei, okamoto keito

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hammiexsquirrel February 5 2011, 08:17:59 UTC
SPOT FOR EIEN :)

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candyapplegirls February 5 2011, 09:47:13 UTC
OH MY GOSH, ANI. Thank you so much! ♥

Reading this made me cry so much.

“From now on, I’ll always be by your side.”

DKAJOAERA LADKJA'D 'ADFJA'D!!!! KILLED MEEEEEE. THE FLUFF. ♥♥♥

And I'm crying so much because you made this for me and you were the first one! ♥

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hammiexsquirrel March 22 2011, 08:47:40 UTC
super late reply

Np, it was your birthday after all =3 Glad I could make you cry on your special day ^_^

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keannegirl01 February 5 2011, 09:14:32 UTC
I was desperately holding myself not to cry.
Til I read the part that Yuto was dead.. My tears almost fell.
BUT. Yamada entered and. cried.
So, I end up crying. *sniff sniff*
No use of holding it in. ;__;
I-I.. what should I say?
I love this.
I-it broke my heart into pieces..
I'm glad the ending was great. <33

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hammiexsquirrel March 22 2011, 08:48:31 UTC
Yes, Yuuto. I was very sad over the fact that Yuuto ended up dead T.T

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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cha_cy_17 February 5 2011, 09:19:22 UTC
NAWWWWWW. I love it ♥♥♥

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hammiexsquirrel March 22 2011, 08:48:49 UTC
Sankyuuuu :DDDDD

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kkad09 February 5 2011, 09:37:25 UTC
I like the way you started the story and how it was told from Chii's point of view <3

I'm quite confused in the part when Ryutaro disappear and Chii found him >_<

Anw, nice fic! ^^

Woohoo, party? Have a blast, Ani-chan! And you gonna look at an apartment? Good luck ne! ^^

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hammiexsquirrel March 22 2011, 08:50:26 UTC
The story wouldn't be interesting unless it was told from Chinen's perspective; he was the one who saw everything after all XD

What are you confuse about? o.o

Ya, it was fun :) We managed to find an apartment too <3

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mayorinaguzaka February 5 2011, 10:12:55 UTC
HOW. BEAUTIFUL :')

I fully made a drama out of this fic in my head, it was beautifully amazing and full of emotion~ :'3 btw, I love this sooo much~ :3

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hammiexsquirrel March 22 2011, 08:50:46 UTC
Sankyuuu so much for reading and commmeting ^___^

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