Comments | hammiexsquirrel: Red Herring [4/4]

hammiexsquirrel

Red Herring [4/4]

Nov 30, 2010 00:34

Title: Red Herring [4/4]
Author: Ani
Genre: Fluff,
Rating: PG
Pairings: Chiitaro
Word Count: 1430
Summary: Seventeen years. He was a normal kid for about eight of those seventeen. Then Johnny's appeared in his life and everything changed. Three years he's been with JUMP. And five years he's been in love with the boy who barely seemed ( Read more... )

inoo kei, p: chiitaro, morimoto ryutaro, series: red herring, chinen yuuri, morimoto shintaro

Comments 35

mayorinaguzaka November 30 2010, 09:14:21 UTC

Yay~
I loved this soooo much!!! XD
and fluffiness always gets me having butterflies in my stomach haha...ChiiTaro FTW~ <3

hammiexsquirrel December 19 2010, 08:41:37 UTC

haha thanks for reading =3

au_gravityfree November 30 2010, 10:38:06 UTC

lovely~♥
omg. I ♥ this~

HBD Chinen Yuri ^^

hammiexsquirrel December 19 2010, 08:41:56 UTC

hehe thanks for reading and commenting ^^

frozenangel24 November 30 2010, 10:45:45 UTC

yey~ happy ending! ~♥

hammiexsquirrel December 19 2010, 08:42:18 UTC

Yup yup, happy ending for a happy birthday XD

hotfruits November 30 2010, 10:47:55 UTC

cute n____________n

hammiexsquirrel December 19 2010, 08:42:36 UTC

Thaaaaanks. It's their definition

lovetoosweet November 30 2010, 11:05:58 UTC

I would comment properly but I'm busy feeding my depression with 800mL ice cream so I'd do it tomorrow.

lovetoosweet December 1 2010, 22:17:03 UTC

"I-it's not what you th-"

His voice broke off as Ryutaro turned his glare on him. "I didn't ask you."
My heart broke a little over this +___+ Ryutaro is evil, how can he be that cold towards Chinen?!

"Ryutaro, do you like me?" Chinen asked quietly with small flame of hope.

After a long silence, Ryutaro finally answered, "That's just Shintaro spouting nonsense-"

"Nii-chan!"

"-so don't listen to him and- C-chinen-kun?"
This doubled the heart breaks DDDDD: HOW CAN RYUTARO BE SUCH AN IDIOT TO HAVE NOT REALIZED HE HAD HURT CHINEN?! D:KJWODIYD??!??!?!?!?!?

"Hey, the result is what matters."
Inoo sounds Slytherin here. The end justifies the means. INOO IS SLYTHERIN?!

Chinen felt his blush deepen as the younger boy leaned in towards him, pressing their foreheads together. The other boy was so close, he could feel his breath tickling his skin. Without another word, Ryutaro gently covered Chinen's mouth with his own. It was only for a brief second, but it left Chinen's heart pounding like mad. His head spun as exhilaration coursed ( ... )

hammiexsquirrel December 19 2010, 08:45:04 UTC

Why not? I love the cold!Ryutaro ♥

CUZ HE'S AN IDIOT AND IDIOTS DON'T REALIZE WHAT THEY DO WRONG until someone starts to cry

OMG INOO AS A SLYTHERIN SOUNDS HOT *___*

XDDDDDDDDDD That was...cheesy.

But they didn't make out XD Good job resisting temptation, Ryutaro. You're not as idiotic as you seem

I think I overfed them :x

NAAH, YOUR 17 ONESHOT THING BEAT THIS BY MILES

lovetoosweet December 19 2010, 21:34:55 UTC

Well, cold Ryutaro is hot 8))

And usually, its Chinen who ends up crying in the end :/

IKR. Sometimes Inoo can be so Slytherin.

It was but it was very appropriate :3

...which was a sad thing, btw.

Over feeding is a-okay! XDDDD

/ignored the last sentence.

Thread 10