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osoth July 22 2010, 17:35:35 UTC
He is pretty, he says. Even when he's a mess from sleeping and drinking and needing shaven. It's an unalterable truth, an ingrained fact, a belief system. And I love it.

I also love that Loe is... I don't know. I read this as fixing his business. Fixing up his business, repairing his business, improving his business. She comes into what is probably actually the most personal part of his life and grabs all the strings and moves them around as she sees fit: here, sell tobacco and supplies. Here, move the razors. And how she makes the razors move is incredible, and that Hal goes along with it is - well, Hal. Very pretty. ;)

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