[fic] naran saram

[halomaschine]

나란 사람/someone like me [5/?]
Kyuhyun/girl!Sungmin; PG-15 (might change); 20334 words; chaptered
Kyuhyun's best friend will always be his little girl, even when she grows up.
a/n: Happy 2011~ tbh I felt unsure about this chapter but if I continued to contemplate/edit I would have abandoned the story, so I hope you are not disappointed~ I changed the

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[untilsally]

Urgh Kyu, Kyubb stop running away!

This story is ace.

[halomaschine]

for such an under- and mal-nourished boy, Kyu sure does a lot of running away ;_; I wonder where he finds the strength~

Thank you for reading~ I'm glad you like it so far :3

[aerialite]

KYUHYUN YOU WERE SO CLOSE D:< you meanie, you. Stop being such a confused boy and go with the flow~

The kiss scene was written absolutely perfectly though, it was like the climax of this chapter (or maybe the story so far :D).

It was good to see Eunhyuk being a good friend for Min :D. I loved her interaction with Kyuhyun and how she's all "SHE LOVES YOUUU, YOU IDIOT" but doesn't really say that.

[halomaschine]

Kyuhyun can't really go much further with Sungmin without having to just see it through to the end... lmao it sounds really crass but yeah he was on top of her and there's little more he could do without actually... doing it >_<

Ahhh I am embarrassed, writing intimate scenes feels sort of humiliating and I'm scared of reader's reactions so I'm glad it was acceptable OTL I had intended for it to be one of the most important/climatic scenes but since I am such a tool I struggled with getting it written ;_;

I like bossy Eunhyuk, too~ and how she knows it's not really her place to flat out tell Sungmin's feelings to Kyuhyun, but gives him little hints regardless. Let us hope Kyuhyun isn't too stupid to read between the lines ㅎㅎ

[keygasmic]

awwwww!! /wibbles
Silly Kyu! Make them betterrrrrr~~~~~~~~
Update soon! xxx

[halomaschine]

Only they can make themselves better~ they are more like the puppeteer whereas I am the puppet D: they make me write what they want, not the other way around~

[keygasmic]

ahahaha! I totally get that! Everything I write always turns out EXACTLY the opposite of what I originally intended it to be like lol
♥

[aeqa24]

Oh my god kyuhyun finally kissed her!!!! Its so obvious that they wanted it so badly akjshasg you left me hanging right there ;~; poor sungmin... Kyuhyun should really man up and stop running away from her!

I'll be waiting for the next chapter \o/

[halomaschine]

I agree, poor Sungmin~ what if she gives up ;_; and leaves like Kyuhyun always does ;_; gives him a taste of his own medicine~

Thank you for reading and commenting :3

[tees2mai]

you tell him eunhyuk /sits to glare at kyu while shakin head

[halomaschine]

lol ikr ;_; Eunhyuk is probably just as frustrated as Kyuhyun. It's like watching a bad drama OTL