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[hallyu]

Title: Falling Apart
Pairing: I actually have no idea except a vague notion.
Rating: PG
Genre: I reached for happy, but I got angsty. Sorry, Gloria-chan.
A/N: It came to me at 11:30 pm. So I got up and wrote a few numbers. It's okay, I guess, but it didn't exactly come out the way I wanted it to. This is kinda like a rough draft. It might not make

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[shienri]

Guh. That's what I'll tell you. Guh.

Why?

Because... because... *sniffs*

*sniffs again*

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I felt like my breath was stuck in my throat when I read this. Beautiful. Simply. Beautiful. No other words can describe it. Just... utterly, terrifyingly heart breaking.

My heart is shattered and I demand you fix it! D<

When I first read this I thought about ShiChul. But then HeeChul appeared and it disappeared. Then I went back to the top. Re-read it... and at first I though ShiHan... but... ugh. Now I'm thinking YehWook. >_________>;; Not sure whether you wanted to know...

But. Anyways. This. Is. Hauntingly. And. Beautifully. Done.

♥

[hallyu]

*hands you tissue and pats your back*

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Really?! Awww!

Well, I have cookies and bandaids XD

I just kinda did this. I was thinking a sort of twisted Kihae when I first started writing this, but now, I'm not quite sure what it is *sweatdrop*

haha, well maybe I do XD

ZOMG. Thank. You. For. Your. Review.

You made me feel all warm inside XD ♥

[hallyu]

Did you notice that there are 13 in all, but the numbers aren't in order? That's because 1 = friends, 2 = action, 3 = lies, etc.? They spell out Falling Apart. Number 13 symbolizes the amount of members in SuJu and is the epilogue.

The numbers aren't in order, because that's how the story goes.

[shienri]

I did notice thirteen but I didn't notice that they spelt Falling Apart. O______o

x_________x;;

That's so cool. I really admire you now. Really, really, really admire you.

[hallyu]

Yup, like I said in the Author Notes, it's strange and probably not going to make any sense.

From what I see it, you have a dream/nightmare in which all this happens. He happens to have died earlier, but is either an 'alter ego' or haunting you (like I said, I read Fight Club earlier) and all that stuff happens and then you wake up and he's dead.

Thank you ^^

sorry for confusing you XD

[hallyu]

No problem ^^

I really don't know what the pairing is myself. It just...happened, you know?

^^

always here to help

[coyotecolored]

ouch :x the first time I read through this, it totally read like YehWook to me, just in mood and tone and all, with Yeh being the silent one and Ryeo fighting the knowledge of it all. it also gave me the impression that both of them had actually died (since everyone was ignoring the central character, packing his things in boxes and stuff) and while one of them understood they were dead, the other hadn't figured it out yet. the dream-time quality of it all gives it that sort of haunting, restless feeling, I guess, until the end when one dies and the other apparently doesn't

[hallyu]

well, I meant that you've become an atheist. You weren't always an atheist. that's why you still have the bible.

XD wow, you're good at reading into things XD

I think Han is agnostic...

XD thank you ^^

i'll mend your wrenched heart with brownies XD

[coyotecolored]

well, I meant more this line:
You realize why he has always been atheist...
it just feels like it could be Shiwon, realizing that about Han, maybe. and Shi would totally be packing his bible around like that xD and I was going to look up the survey or whatever where Han said he was an atheist, but now I can't find it, oops. maybe he's just a good little Commie! 8D he really doesn't seem the hardboiled type like Heechul, does he...

[hallyu]

ah, that makes sense. xD so Shiwonnie xD

Han isn't like Heechul *thankfully. who kno's what would happen if Heechul rubbed off on innocent looking Hannie* in my opinion.

XD

[chuchama]

It's crazy good and I always love a side of vagueness, symbolism, and a scoop of vanilla ice cream with my stories.

[hallyu]

XD thank you XD

vanilla? XD I prefer brownies or anything abismally chocolate

but vanilla is good too ^^

[hallyu]

oh, and you're added XD *as a friend*

[quaris]

You know, I read through this yesterday, and I came back today, and I looked at it, and I was all '...oh no. Numbers. ...was I supposed to read that in numerical order?' Then I had a weird inner conflict thing ;_;. But it didn't really matter because it still ended up at 13, which hurrrts because. D: heartwrench. heartwrench. *cries*

Aaah, that was really sad. I didn't have a solid pairing when I read it, but ;_;. The repetition of the phrase Your world is falling apart, ... by ... by ... was a really nice touch; for me it seemed to further emphasize the 'downward spiral' of it all.

Really beautiful, even if it's rough-drafty. <3

*gives you <3*

[hallyu]

Did you notice that there are 13 in all, but the numbers aren't in order? That's because 1 = friends, 2 = action, 3 = lies, etc.? They spell out Falling Apart. Number 13 symbolizes the amount of members in SuJu and is the epilogue.

The numbers aren't in order, because that's how the story goes.

XD thank you

*hugs you and hands you brownie*