Captive

Oct 24, 2007 18:04

Author: magentabear
Requestor: averita
Claim: Luna drives the Death Eaters crazy while in captivity.
Rating: PG-13
Pairings (if any): Gen
Summary: They had no idea what they were getting themselves into.
Warnings (if applicable): None.
Author's Notes: Thank you so much to the wonderful queenb23more looking this over!

Captive )

character: narcissa malfoy, character: luna lovegood, character: draco malfoy, character: peter pettigrew, character: lucius malfoy, requestor: averita, pairing: gen, author: magentabear, character: severus snape: character: ant

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write_out October 25 2007, 02:11:46 UTC
"Malfoy seems to think she's friends with Potter."

"Malfoy thinks Nagini is a male."

Voldemort nodded. It was a valid point.

Oh, this is great! I really liked this one- very different from everything else I've read lately.

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magentabear October 27 2007, 01:52:10 UTC
Why thank you!

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beceh October 25 2007, 03:34:14 UTC
Bahaha. That was good.

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magentabear October 27 2007, 01:52:20 UTC
Thanks!

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snegurochka_lee October 25 2007, 11:29:38 UTC
Hee!!! This was wonderful! I love the light tone of it, and the witty little observations of the POV voice in each segment. And oh, Luna! Of course she would drive them mad. How perfect. :)

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magentabear October 27 2007, 01:52:58 UTC
Oh, I love Luna. Thanks for reading!

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secretsolitaire October 25 2007, 11:56:08 UTC
Oh, Luna! The more I read her, the more I love her. I can totally see her getting under the Death Eaters' skin. :-D

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magentabear October 27 2007, 01:53:24 UTC
I bet she drove them crazy. Thanks for reading!

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lazy_neutrino October 25 2007, 21:12:48 UTC
Draco continued sulking. He had perfected it to a science during sixth year and was now one failure away from making it a classical art.

I loved this line!

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magentabear October 27 2007, 01:53:58 UTC
Is it egotistical for me to say I like it, too? I hope not.

Thanks!

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