Hot Fuzz WIP (Twinge) Pt. I.

[haliyah]

Gimme a break here.  Like it says, this is a WIP, and, as such, it's entirely WYSIWYG.  You get all my roughness, notes and highlighted bits.  And I still don't know where it's supposed to be going, but I sat there and wrote nearly 3K words one day.  I couldn't stop the torrent.  That's insane, for me at least.  So yeah. Gimme ideas and criticism

Comments

[hypercaz]

*caz's flist page dies from long texts*

Umm hello, haliyah. =D I hope you don't mind, but could you please LJ cut your fics? My computer is freakin' out.

[haliyah]

Oh, fuck! Dx Sorry! Will go fix. *feels like a tard*

[hypercaz]

aaww no, s'ok. =) I'll read your fic when I'm done marathoning Knight Rider for the day.

[haliyah]

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Hogawd, really? xD Am I going to drag you into the awesome that is Hot Fuzz fandom?

New Knight Rider of the real Knight Rider? O:

[tawg]

I'm assuming this is safely tucked behind a cut where it belongs :p

This was actually really interesting - you got a nice bit of character stuff across in the last bit, with Danny and Nicholas chatting on the train. And Nicholas being all tetchy in the cab read as being spot on. Like last time, I'm still curious as to what they're off to, and why they need their dress uniforms...

[haliyah]

It is now!

So it doesn't suck horribly for being an unedited rambling draft of an idea. Awesome! ;) I actually have another idea about why they'd need their dress uniforms, but it's feeling like a Christmas fic. O:

Read part two, then! ;P

[hypercaz]

very amusing, keeps in the mood of the movie. =D Next part now!

[haliyah]

Woohoo! :D