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CPR for Concussions (2/?)

Jun 07, 2009 01:58

Title: CPR for Concussions (2/?)
Author: halfsquat
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Gretchen/ Liz
Rating: R (very soft R), sexual themes
Genre: Comedy/Romance?
Word Count: 3,245 aprox.
Summary: Omniscient 3rd person continuation of “CPR for Concussions (1/?). What would happen if Liz decided to give Gretchen a try?
Spoilers: Ep. 103 “Blind Date” .
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rating: r, pairing: liz/gretchen, fandom: 30 rock

Comments 21

lilysela June 7 2009, 08:19:30 UTC

Part 2! Hooray!

You've captured Liz perfectly, as I was reading this, in my head I was hearing Liz's voice hehe. Can I add you so I can keep up with updates to this story?

halfsquat June 7 2009, 09:09:27 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I worry about how I write Liz. With Gretchen, we only get that glimpse in "Blind Date" so she's more flexible. I have more wiggle room with her character. With Liz, I'm like, I hope I'm not butchering it. I've only seen the half the first season of 30 Rock.

Feel free to add me. Anyone can. This is strictly going to be a fan fiction LJ for me, anyway.

half_life33 June 7 2009, 08:39:19 UTC

Aww yay! I love this pairing! And duh I love Stephanie March with a passion. Anyway ill read whatever you write:)

halfsquat June 7 2009, 09:11:19 UTC

lol I couldn't tell you loved Stephanie March. Your avatar with her in it totally threw me off. :-P

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading.

trexkitten June 7 2009, 15:33:25 UTC

OMG This was perfect, Liz falling all over herself, so her! Jack was great, I could practically hear him talking as I read. I really hope you continue this marvellous fic.
And may I also Friend you so I can catch any updates/fics?

halfsquat June 7 2009, 15:46:42 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad to hear Jack is spot on. Liz, too.

Feel free to friend me. In fact, I encourage it. :)

trexkitten June 7 2009, 15:51:51 UTC

Thanks, will do!

majorstooshie June 7 2009, 17:30:19 UTC

This was awesome sauce, please continue.

I think you captured Liz really well. But especially her initial awkwardness at the whole situation. The way she deals with it all is very her.

halfsquat June 8 2009, 07:51:20 UTC

Thank you. Stay tuned. :-P It will probably only get more awkward. Poor Liz.

kindmilk June 8 2009, 01:30:14 UTC

Ahhh fantastic! Seriously, lovely lovely stuff. You capture her insecurity so well...please continue!

halfsquat June 8 2009, 07:52:35 UTC

I will continue. :) Hopefully very shortly.

I'm glad you liked it.