Idol Survivor: "You, Once My Girl"

Mar 21, 2021 12:51

You, Once My Girl idol survivor | daily-fic challenge, day 2 | 139 words ( Read more... )

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murielle March 21 2021, 19:54:28 UTC
Aw! Sadly true for all mothers, everywhere.

Lovely!

*Hugs*

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halfshellvenus March 21 2021, 22:02:08 UTC
Thank you so much!

This gave me such pangs, writing it. I'm still trying to pull myself up out of the melancholy to start the next story for tomorrow!

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passing_through March 23 2021, 03:17:02 UTC
Ahhhh, this is BEAUTIFUL and heart-breaking and is straight from the mother's soul.

When I read this, This will not last. I was shot through with a brief sense of dread ( ... )

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halfshellvenus March 23 2021, 08:00:07 UTC
Your last stanze perfectly captures both the joy and sadness of parenthood.
It's such a wonderful and amazing journey, and yet it leaves you with an open wound even as your children go out into the world and thrive. I'm not sure anyone who isn't a parent (especially a parent of adult children) can really understand just how painful that is, or the bittersweetness of the whole journey.

and that for that day or weekend we were all a family again under one roof and every bit of left-behind mess was worth it :)Yes! It makes everything feel complete and normal again, even if only for a brief while ( ... )

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