White Collar Fan Fiction: "Bon Appétit"

May 23, 2016 23:46

Title: Bon Appétit
Fandom: White Collar
Characters: Mozzie and Neal (Gen)
Rating: PG
Summary: You can always do things the normal way, but where's the fun in that?
Note: I missed the deadline on the 24-turnaround and then some, but this was written for runthecon and the prompt of "Legal crimes ( Read more... )

my_fic, white collar, fanfic

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ashley5627 May 24 2016, 13:59:02 UTC
Oh, this was lovely! I always love to see those two partners in crime do their thing! Thank you for posting this even though it was late! You did my prompt great justice! :-D

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halfshellvenus May 24 2016, 19:55:14 UTC
Your prompt led right to this story-- trying to think of something that could be illegal, slightly, but ultimately wasn't.

And oh, the chance for Mozzie and Neal to banter and have fun with this was just so tempting.

Thank you for such a lovely prompt, and I'm sorry I wasn't able to fulfill it in time for the comm. But so worth writing! :)

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sinfulslasher May 24 2016, 15:20:45 UTC
This was really awesome and totally something I can see them pulling off. Sneaky Mozzie! *two thumbs up*

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halfshellvenus May 24 2016, 19:56:09 UTC
I get such a kick out of Mozzie, especially out of his utter seriousness in cooking up weird schemes.

And the bantering... I so miss it. :D

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sallymn May 24 2016, 21:26:18 UTC
Oh that is so them - and I love how Peter has such a presence without saying a word :)

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halfshellvenus May 24 2016, 21:35:15 UTC
Mozzie knew the jig was up. :D There's a little of the town sheriff in Peter, I think.

Thanks for reading!

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sherylyn May 24 2016, 22:16:44 UTC
Hee!! That's delightful!! And soooo very *them*, completely!! I love it! :)

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halfshellvenus May 24 2016, 23:35:59 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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tsuki_no_bara May 25 2016, 01:54:57 UTC
well this was unexpected! of course peter would ruin mozzie's con, and of course neal can read his mind from across the restaurant. i'm just imagining peter's "you are not going to commit a crime while i'm eating dinner with my wife" face and it makes me giggle.

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halfshellvenus May 25 2016, 06:20:00 UTC
Hahaha-- I like your description of Peter's expression.

"I am here for Romantic Purposes, and there will be no con games on my watch!"

This seemed like something Mozzie would not be able to resist doing, and the prompt just kicked it off unexpectedly for me as well1

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