Yes! I had thought about albinism, but it's XP and porphyria that are completely inflexible about light exposure.
The combination of the beauty of a moonlit garden, with the sadness of that being the only choice and the choices getting more difficult over time, was irresistible, and I think the prompt actually helped focus the story on simple things we take for granted and how the simple things that remain can still be truly wonderful.
Thank you! XP is Xeroderma Pigmentosum, a genetic condition in which sunlight (even a small amount) burns the skin. You need special shades/filters on the windows and everything. It's just tragic. :(
I have planted new ones over the years, Chinese lanterns and fringy foliage to tempt the touch of your fingers, and white, blue, yellow and pink flowers to show a hint of true color despite the dampening effect of the gloom.
I couldn't tell you at the point the importance of darkness to the second-person character here, but I didn't care. This was such a beautiful sentence I just let myself get swept up into the words.
As I did grow to learn more, I was sad, but still touched by the beauty.
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The combination of the beauty of a moonlit garden, with the sadness of that being the only choice and the choices getting more difficult over time, was irresistible, and I think the prompt actually helped focus the story on simple things we take for granted and how the simple things that remain can still be truly wonderful.
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Albinism is something that has long fascinated me. I had an albino neighbor for a decade....
Nice job on this. Glad to see you writing!
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(what's xp?)
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I couldn't tell you at the point the importance of darkness to the second-person character here, but I didn't care. This was such a beautiful sentence I just let myself get swept up into the words.
As I did grow to learn more, I was sad, but still touched by the beauty.
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I'm glad you liked this piece, bittersweet as I know it was.
Thanks, as always, for reading and commenting.
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I'm sure your dad was an amazing man.
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