Justified Slash Drabble: "Steal Your Breath Away" (PG-13)

Sep 13, 2012 10:44

Title: Steal Your Breath Away
Fandom: Justified
Characters: Raylan/Boyd (Slash, Drabble)
Author: HalfshellVenus
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Just for tonight…
Author's Notes: A team_prose entry for the writerverse prompt of "One Time Only."
Also for writers_choice ("Shed").

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In the woodshed... )

random-fandom, writerverse, justified, my_fic, drabbles

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heliokleia September 13 2012, 20:10:57 UTC
You wrote Raylan/Boyd slash drabble - YAY!
S02 of Justified just started two weeks ago in Helioland and Boyd looks so hawt with his 50ties glasses on, IMO.^^
*nods**nods*
- And he has every right to pout about Raylan because yeah...
"how come Raylan gets to make all the damn rules, anyway?"
- Damn right, Boyd... go tell the cocky and cheating bastard! ;)

Mmhh... thank you very much for sharing, my dear Mme Venus; this is my first Justified fic in general - so the more I'm glad it was your delicious little drabble who finally got me, hehe...^^
*huggles*
... )

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halfshellvenus September 13 2012, 20:19:08 UTC
I didn't even know you watched Justified, but I'm glad you found this!

I haven't been writing Justified long-- just a couple of drabbles and a short fic-- but the end of S1 sent me chasing after Raylan/Boyd slash ASAP. There's such a vibe between them, so much implied history and such inability to just walk away.

Thanks for reading!

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tsuki_no_bara September 14 2012, 04:53:03 UTC
not a regular thing my ass.... we all know they can't quit each other. :D boyd's reaction - "this is the best thing that's ever happened" - makes this really sweet, which is kind of odd for raylan/boyd. but i like it.

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halfshellvenus September 14 2012, 06:03:17 UTC
we all know they can't quit each other.
It's so easy to think the first time will be the only one when you're halfway to denying it's even happening. But in this case, I just don't see how.

And Boyd... he just gives the impression of being the one who feels more, and we know he was the one who was "left." The way he looks at Raylan even now is so moonstruck half the time. Which is one of the things I love about the show!

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ariss_tenoh September 14 2012, 09:31:09 UTC
LOL! I love this drabble. I've only seen half of season.1 but these two definitely have chemistry.

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halfshellvenus September 14 2012, 19:01:19 UTC
Yay-- thank you!

I tell you, by the time you get to the last couple of episodes of S1, your slash goggles will be practically glued on. :0

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gwylliondream September 14 2012, 19:35:06 UTC
Lovely job on this drabble. So many things rolled into it!

Loved this:

"Raylan acts like Boyd's about to start picking out curtains"

<3

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halfshellvenus September 14 2012, 19:57:33 UTC
That's what I love about drabbles-- how much you can imply rather than explicitly state, and yet the reader still gets the whole sense of it.

"Raylan acts like Boyd's about to start picking out curtains"
And while Boyd scoffs at the idea, at some point down the road he's going to feel that fleeting temptation, and wish things were closer to that than the truth of just secrets and stolen moments.

Thanks so much for reading!

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rekindle956 September 15 2012, 03:27:54 UTC
I really, really liked this. Thank you.

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halfshellvenus September 15 2012, 06:30:02 UTC
I'm so glad! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on it. :)

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