The Real LJ Idol: "Thief of Hearts" (Home Game entry)

Jun 01, 2012 20:17

The Thief Of Hearts
real lj idol | week 29 | Home Game (unofficial) entry
Appropriation

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I stole something from you... )

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devon99 June 3 2012, 12:36:12 UTC
This is beautiful beautiful:)

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halfshellvenus June 3 2012, 17:29:25 UTC
Thank you! I liked it a great deal when I started it, but poetry is rare in Idol, and my doubts crept in as to whether it was competitive. So I went with the other entry instead. Very lucky, as it turned out, since that landed me on a team with no eliminations this week.

Thanks for reading!

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whipchick June 3 2012, 23:23:27 UTC
Very sweet and lovely - the parentheticals are really nice!

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halfshellvenus June 4 2012, 16:12:57 UTC
Thank you! After I stare at something like this too long, it gets faster and faster and kind of sing-song in my head, and then I lose all perspective on it even when I really liked it to begin with!

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jem0000000 June 4 2012, 10:20:51 UTC
Awwww! This is beautiful. :)

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halfshellvenus June 4 2012, 16:13:38 UTC
Glad you liked it! You can probably see why I went with the other entry, though. Poetry is risky, and you never know how well it will hold up in the voting.

Thanks for taking the time to read my Home Game entry!

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jem0000000 June 5 2012, 00:19:12 UTC
Lol, yes, that was definitely a good decision on your part. (*is watching the appropriation poll as we speak*)

You're welcome. :)

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