Title: The Blackest Heart
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Michael/Lincoln (Slash, Drabble)
Rating: PG-13
Summary (Pre-series): There were things Lincoln wasn't supposed to see…
Author's Notes: Michael/Lincoln, unwilling desire, for
realpestilence. Also for
fanfic100, this is "Black."
x-x-x-x-x
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Unnatural desires... )
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So much passion, so much wrongness. Guh.
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I love the sting of jealousy, especially in slash and especially where the person feeling it is trapped and cannot make their desires known.
Sometimes, it is doomed to burst out under pressure, even when the person hopes to deny it forever.
But with a drabble like this one, it's more about capturing the moment-- especially because Lincoln is the jealous one here, and I hardly ever write that setup. The prompt made mde do it. :)
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Yeah, White Collar's Neal & Peter have brought me back to the fold, so to speak! LOL
Linc would feel trapped. By both his feelings and by his relationship to his brother but I think eventually he'd have to make a choice. Or let Michael make it for him.
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And knowing Lincoln, he'd either make the choice by crossing the line while drunk, or he'd suffer in silence until Michael made the choice for him.
So many kinks/opportunities, so little time!
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So wrong in so many ways and still it kinda makes sense - him being jealous of Michaels 'relationships'.
And I really love your style:3
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And given the chance to see something he wants, even though he shouldn't, something Michael's just giving away right and left... fwoom!
Glad you enjoyed this. :)
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I think it's Linc being short-tempered and Michael being himself - saying something totally innocent but making it sound sooo not innocent :D - what makes them look so good together.
(hope you get what I mean :D)
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Lincoln watched, his soul as black as the shadows that hid him.
Awesome line! This officially classifies Linc's jealousy as seething I believe!
You certainly haven't lost your M/L mojo, my friend. :)
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Partly because sexed-up intense angry Lincoln is all the more RAWR!
Whoo-- nice to see so many M/L lovers enjoying this one. :)
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