Comments | halfshellvenus: White Collar Fiction: "All For You" (Peter, Mozzie, Neal, PG)

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White Collar Fiction: "All For You" (Peter, Mozzie, Neal, PG)

Jun 10, 2011 22:45

Title: All for You
Fandom: White Collar
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Peter, Mozzie, Neal (Gen, Humor)
Rating: PG
Summary (S1): Enemies, co-conspirators, friends of friends… sometimes, the lines got blurred.
Author's Notes: An Australian Flood Auction Fic for wraithkeeper.
Also for writers_choice ("Plan").

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( 'Neal said you wanted to talk to me...' )

random-fandom, my_fic, white collar, flood_auction_fic, writers_choice

Comments 31

sahiya June 12 2011, 07:14:22 UTC

Awww! This was incredibly sweet. Neal deserves more people being kind to him for the sake of being kind.

halfshellvenus June 12 2011, 07:17:27 UTC

He does-- and one of the things that we love about Neal is that when gestures like this are heartfelt, he doesn't at all take them for granted. He loves the art of the con, but at the same time... he also likes people, and those that are close to him really matter to him. :)

tj_teejay June 12 2011, 09:27:35 UTC

Aw, total win, that one. Sweet and very lovely. I'm sure Neal was very touched.

halfshellvenus June 13 2011, 06:35:06 UTC

For all that he wants the world to throw riches and good fortune at him, Neal still knows that's all a fantasy.

His actual friends offering him heartfelt and wonderful things? I think he knows how truly rare and priceless that is. :)

winterstar95 June 12 2011, 13:06:21 UTC

Perfect voices and I could definitely see this as a scene in the show. Nice!

Donna aka winterstar

halfshellvenus June 13 2011, 07:08:59 UTC

Thank you! I so enjoy writing character voices, especially lesser-seen humorous situations like Peter and Mozzie's tete-a-tetes.

Thanks for reading!

damietta June 12 2011, 17:57:40 UTC

This was fun. I liked Neal and Peter yanking each other's chains even as they were saying "thank you". And, Moz at a party with beer, nachos and quiche and caviar, LOL.

Mrs. Suit - Elizabeth was a great exchange as well!

halfshellvenus June 13 2011, 07:12:24 UTC

I liked Neal and Peter yanking each other's chains even as they were saying "thank you".
They can't really help themselves, can they? It's part of why I enjoy their banter so much.

I can see Mozzie enjoying all of those things, though perhaps secretly. That menu really is half-Neal (and possibly Elizabeth) and half-everybody else.

It's funny, isn't it, how even with his suspiciousness of The Suit, Mozzie has a bit of a crush on Mrs. Suit-- and we can completely understand why. I think Peter is probably oblivious (thus far), or perhaps he thinks everyone has a crush on Elizabeth. That would sure make sense to him. :)

ursula4x June 12 2011, 19:09:52 UTC

adorable!

halfshellvenus June 13 2011, 07:13:06 UTC

Thank you! :)