Comments | halfshellvenus: Prison Break Gen Fiction: Nine Innings Of The Right Kind Of Nothing (Humor, All-Dialogue, PG)

halfshellvenus

Prison Break Gen Fiction: Nine Innings Of The Right Kind Of Nothing (Humor, All-Dialogue, PG)

Oct 17, 2008 18:08

Title: Nine Innings Of The Right Kind Of Nothing
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Michael and Lincoln (Gen, Humor, All-dialogue)
Rating: PG
Summary: A little bit of silliness for msgenevieve's birthday. Only slightly late. ;)

x-x-x-x-x

( You know what that looks like, don't you? )

my_fic, ml_gen, birthday, pb_gen

Comments 13

tuesdaeschild October 18 2008, 10:38:34 UTC

Oooh! Michael's coming of age! And I'm with him on the hot-dog! *feels queasy*

Loved it! Lucky msgenevieve!! :)

halfshellvenus October 18 2008, 19:27:32 UTC

Oooh! Michael's coming of age!
It'd be so nice to set this more in the "now," but the boys are always on the run. And too much later in Michael's life, we have the problem of Lincoln being in prison all the time (stupid dope).

And I'm with him on the hot-dog! *feels queasy*
I like hotdogs with the ketchup, mustard and relish. But that's it. Anything else starts to get scary, and putting everything on it... urk.

So glad you enjoyed reading! Thank you! :)

ariss_tenoh October 18 2008, 17:30:28 UTC

Just wanted to wish you a happy birthday in advance^_^

halfshellvenus October 18 2008, 19:28:06 UTC

Thank you so much! The good wishes always help with the sting of the number that's coming up. :0

etherealflaim October 18 2008, 19:04:31 UTC

Teehee. You do all-dialogue fics so well. =D *loss for words*

~EF

halfshellvenus October 18 2008, 19:29:06 UTC

They're much more fun to write than I ever excpected, back when I wrote the first one for Supernatural. I mean, sometimes the dialogue is my favorite part of the snarky interaction, so why not go all the way with it?

:D

msgenevieve October 19 2008, 02:46:57 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

This is just so nice! I love the thought of Lincoln trying to think of something great for Michael's birthday, and all those little things going not-quite-right but the important thing - celebrating the milestone together - being perfect.

Thank you so much!

halfshellvenus October 19 2008, 05:17:44 UTC

I love the thought of Lincoln trying to think of something great for Michael's birthday, and all those little things going not-quite-right
It's such a guy thing, and maybe even more a Lincoln thing, to have that "Everybody loves what I love!" mentality, and then gift someone with a truly horrific offering like that hot dog. Suburban-Dad Lincoln would be the kind of guy who gives his wife a tool kit for her birthday. ;)

but the important thing - celebrating the milestone together - being perfect.
That's the part I've always liked about the brothers-- everything on the surface seems mismatched and wrong, but the parts deep down that actually matter still work. Family is more important than that you have fun every single minute you're a family. Or even a lot of minutes, given the Burrows/Scofield history.

So glad you liked it, and I hope it maked your day just a little bit better-- late though it was!

msgenevieve October 19 2008, 06:45:10 UTC

and maybe even more a Lincoln thing, to have that "Everybody loves what I love!" mentality, and then gift someone with a truly horrific offering like that hot dog.

LOL, yes!

Now, I have a little something for you and you can find it here at my LJ. If I watched more SPN, I would have written *those* brothers for you, but I decided to go with what I know. Oh, and it was inspired by the icon you've used above, the one that always reminds me of you. :)

strifechaos October 20 2008, 02:19:17 UTC

Nothing to do with the story but: HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETIE! *glomps*

halfshellvenus October 20 2008, 07:18:10 UTC

Hee! Thank you very much! It was a wonderful day, and it's so nice to hear from you. :)