Fic: Dirty Girl [Killjoys, gen]

[halfeatenmoon]

Title: Dirty Girl
Fandom: MCR (Killjoys)
Wordcount: 600
Pairing/Characters: Gen, Agent Cherri Cola
Rating/Warnings: PG for language
Summary: Holding a gig in the dust and the daylight was suicidal, but the sound and the taste and the feel of danger was what she lived for.
Notes: Totally dustverse, barely even hints at the Killjoys or MCR. I

Comments

[littlewitch34]

Ooh! This is good! Gave me the shivers, just a little bit. Love the way you wrote Agent Cherri Cola.

[halfeatenmoon]

Thank you! I love ACC a lot and I don't even know what she looks like yet.

[romanticalgirl]

Gritty and vivid and visceral. Good stuff.

[halfeatenmoon]

Thank you for taking time to read my weird quasi-poetry. Glad you liked it.

[roxy_palace]

Sorry, I'm only three lines in but I had to come and comment because you've totally nailed the tone and the language. It's GORGEOUS. I love it.

MORE!

[halfeatenmoon]

Thank you for loving my weirdass dirtysexy prose poetry pretentiousness!

[turps33]

I love the language you used here, I can almost smell and feel every word.

[halfeatenmoon]

I'm glad people are so into the language. I love a good description.

[only4ev]

fuckin A. this is all types of Shiny!I wanna write like this!