Comments | halfdutch: The Farther You Go, The Closer You Get

halfdutch

The Farther You Go, The Closer You Get

Jul 21, 2009 23:50

Title: The Farther You Go, The Closer You Get
Pairing: Sun/Frank
Rating: R
Note: For isis2015, who asked for Sun fics at the lostsquee luau. :)
Spoilers: General S5
( She knows it's wrong, to lie here in Frank's arms, but there's really no right and wrong anymore. )

lost_fic, sun/frank

Comments 21

mrspiccoloswife July 22 2009, 17:33:26 UTC

Beautiful fic. I ship this pretty hard, and this is the first time I've seen fic for them! Thanks for writing =]

halfdutch July 23 2009, 04:28:27 UTC

Thank you! And wow, no one else has written this before? I'm kind of amazed because they definitely are worth shipping! Thanks for reading and for your comment.

bachlava July 23 2009, 12:33:15 UTC

This is an angle that wouldn't have occurred to me for this pairing, but I'm glad that it's occurred to you, because you've brought out Sun's state of mind/emotions so nicely. Bonus points for Frank's/Jeff Fahey's impressive chest hair. ;)

halfdutch July 25 2009, 04:34:09 UTC

Thank you! It's really only my second time writing Sun (and Frank as well I think!) And yes, I could hardly avoid mentioning the chest hair! Especially when Jin/DDK's chest is so smooth, it seemed such an obvious point of contrast. :)

cynthia_arrow July 23 2009, 20:32:21 UTC

I love Sun's meditations on Frank here (so spot on!), and the twisted but very real emotional logic she has about why she needs him so much.

halfdutch July 25 2009, 04:36:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad the emotional logic made sense. Sun has been such a driving force in her quest for revenge and then to find Jin, I imagine she would feel a little rudderless! Thanks for reading. :) (And I love your icon!)

jazzpno July 31 2009, 15:31:05 UTC

I like this pairing too, though this is the first fic that I've read for them.

Sun is such a melancholy character, and Frank has a quiet steadiness that compliments that beautifully (and I adore the chest hair).

>>>And she doesn't know what else to do, not when Frank holds her so tight and tells her shes beautiful and that everything will be okay.<<<

Hopeful.

halfdutch August 2 2009, 04:12:33 UTC

Thank you, dear! I guess this is a rather rare pairing! Thank you for the lovely comment. :)

siluria August 2 2009, 20:38:20 UTC

Wow - there's been some odd pairings come out of the luau, and although this is up there with the oddest, I think you did a fantastic job with it!!

halfdutch August 3 2009, 00:23:00 UTC

Thanks, hon. I guess I didn't consider this one so odd since it did occur to me while watching those eps! But in terms of what's being written yep, I think it's unconquered territory! Glad you liked it.