Comments | halfdutch: Warm Beer (Sawyer/Desmond) NC-17

halfdutch

Warm Beer (Sawyer/Desmond) NC-17

Mar 05, 2007 18:22

Title: Warm Beer
Pairing: Sawyer/Desmond, some residual Sawyer/Kate
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Desmond suggests a trade for some of the Dharma beer
Spoilers: Tricia Tanaka is Dead
Note: Written for the Lost Riffs prompt, "Wash away my troubles, wash away my pain." This all started when I realized that Desmond wouldn't mind nasty warm beer if he's been ( Read more... )

lost_fic, sawyer/desmond, lost_fic_s3

Comments 40

eponine119 March 6 2007, 02:54:13 UTC

Nice. They make a nice pair. There's some sweetness in it, too, there at the end, Desmond with his head on Sawyer's stomach. I like the way the end loops back to the beginning, beer and sex.

This:

“Wouldn’t exactly call her a lady.”

“Your friend, then.”

“Ain’t exactly my friend, either.”

I thought was terrific dialogue. So perfectly in character.

halfdutch March 6 2007, 03:30:41 UTC

Thank you! First time writing Desmond! I rewatched "Flashes" to make sure I wasn't completely botching him. And hee, I'm a sucker for cuddling after sex. And, apparently, so is Sawyer! *ahem* Glad you liked it, hon. :)

zelda_zee March 6 2007, 06:27:43 UTC

Somehow I'm totally shocked that you wrote Desmond/Sawyer! Never would have predicted that! I don't think I've ever read this pairing before. I like the set up, basically that they're horny and lonely and one of them, at least, is drunk - makes perfect sense that under those circumstances there might be a bit of hanky-panky. And I love the beach sex and I like the image of them just drifting off sprawled over each other on the sand.

You surprised me with this one!

halfdutch March 6 2007, 07:36:03 UTC

I surprised myself! But I couldn't sleep last night and this just came to me. Since I didn't want to sex Sawyer up with any of the van patrol, Desmond was the obvious choice. And it seemed a shame that Desmond didn't get any beer. And there's Sawyer, alone and drunk and heartbroken!

I know other people have ficced these two and, let's face it, it's the time-honored sex-for-an-time-from-Sawyer's-stash swap, just with Desmond instead of, say, Boone.
Glad you liked this. :)

cmonkatiekatie March 6 2007, 08:20:57 UTC

“Yeah. If you were a snake...”

“I’d’ve bitten you.”

I'm in love with that little exchange. All the dialogue really, so spot on.

And then here?

Desmond’s mouth was just about the sweetest place he had ever been

Here I'm just gone.

halfdutch March 7 2007, 05:10:18 UTC

*beams*

Thank you, hon! Desmond wanted to be written and to have his way with Sawyer and of course i had to comply. ;)

evilmissbecky March 6 2007, 11:09:25 UTC

Oh GUH. This is wonderfully hot, and beautifully written. I hope you write more of this pairing!

halfdutch March 7 2007, 05:14:25 UTC

Why, thank you! :) I could see my way toward writing more of these two. So much pretty together, who can resist?

emiliglia March 6 2007, 12:12:20 UTC

Oh that was all sorts of yummy. With the accents and the hot, I think I'd be all asplody if they so much as get a scene together sometime this season.

I like how in-character Sawyer was. Well, they both were in-character, but normally us slash writers like to make Sawyer an equal opportunity slut, when that's really not how he'd react. He's still a slut, though. :P

halfdutch March 7 2007, 05:19:09 UTC

They've barely interacted all. It's not fair! If we can't get Jack and Sawyer in the same scene, I think we have to improvise!

And hee, for once Sawyer wasn't the slutty one, LOL. I'm always having him put the moves on Jack (since Jack is kind of move-free, heh), so it was fun to have someone hit on Sawyer. (Although, truth be told, I've written just about everyone throwing themselves at Sawyer at one time or another! All he ever needs to do is just sit there!)