It's comment porn day...

Feb 03, 2007 15:24

YAY! Except I'm feeling very uninspired. :-/ Perhaps I can play later? I left one (not very porny) comment but it wasn't a continuation of a thread so perhaps I did it wrong?

Hmmm... what else to do today? This is lame, but if someone wants to prompt me, maybe I can write something? And maybe not just Lost?

Leave a comment

halfdutch February 4 2007, 01:02:47 UTC
Here you go! :) My first-ever Jack Bauer (near) porn.

Jack never got drunk. He couldn't ever risk not being sober whenever the phone rang, and more often than not, it rang in the odd hours that should have been his own. Not that he could even call his time his own. But tonight, he didn't care. He went to the bar around the corner from his house and pounded three beers before switching to bourbon. At least he could stumble home.

He was drunk, but not drunk enough to turn off his need to observe everyone in the bar, assess their threat level. He'd zeroed in on a rangy fellow leaning over the jukebox, his fine blonde hair falling in his eyes. The man had glanced up, feeling his eyes on him and Jack didn't look away. Blue eyes narrowed in a challenge. Or an invitation. That part seemed fuzzy. Jack looked away. When he could no longer tell the difference between someone who wanted to throw down verus someone who simply wanted him ... it was time to leave ( ... )

Reply

crowgirl13 February 4 2007, 06:07:39 UTC
*wibbles*

Uh...yeah.

I came over here to slap a poem in you LJ...but damn.
Looks like I'm going to have to find coherency and come back later.

[24 is a good look for you, btw.]

Reply

halfdutch February 4 2007, 06:31:14 UTC
Ooh, thank you kindly! :) And I wouldn't mind a poem!

Reply

crowgirl13 February 4 2007, 11:39:09 UTC
That's immensely reassuring. [I'm being a little bit of a comment poem coward, and seem to be sticking with folks who are familiar with my schtick.]

I *will* be back!
♥!

Reply

didibreakit February 4 2007, 21:17:43 UTC
*dances* Huzzah! And like it was stated above...24 is a *very* good look for you ;)

I love the line in the very beginning about Jack not drinking because he always needs to answer his phone...so true and yet I never thought about it like that :)

Reply

halfdutch February 5 2007, 02:03:27 UTC
Thank you! :) It was fun breaking my 24 cherry. And yeah, I don't think Jack gets much of a break, ever, poor guy.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up