Comments | halfdutch: Lay It Down (Jack/Sawyer)

halfdutch

Lay It Down (Jack/Sawyer) - R

Mar 31, 2006 20:24

Title: Lay It Down
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Summary: You know he won't just let you go
Rating: R
Spoilers: Up through Lockdown
Note: Second person - a first for me! For the fabulous lillyjk's birthday. *smooch*

( Even if he loses, Sawyer still wins. )

lost_fic, lost_fic_s2, jack/sawyer

Comments 96

eponine119 April 1 2006, 05:46:01 UTC

He’s wanted you, needed you, and the knowledge makes you feel like a god, a giant. Sawyer is your strength.

Oh, god. This was amazing. I don't have any words.

halfdutch April 1 2006, 17:39:00 UTC

!!

You stagger me. Thank you so much for reading and leaving fb. Your good opinion always means a lot to me. <333

nehellania April 1 2006, 06:35:08 UTC

I have been in exile from the internet and LJ since my computer died on Monday. This is the first fic I've read in days. And it was awesome. So very worth all the time spent agonizing over my lack of fic to read.

This is exactly the sort of fic I was hoping to come back to after this week's episode. I know I can always count on you to deliver the goods! Bravo!

halfdutch April 1 2006, 17:40:40 UTC

Wow, thank you! ;-D I knew there'd be a lot of great fic coming out of this ep but after it aired, I didn't have a single idea. And then this one hit me and I just wanted to hurry up and get it down.

Thanks so much! *blush*

Good luck with your computer!

zelda_zee April 1 2006, 08:16:29 UTC

Oh, lovely. This is the first post Lockdown fic I've seen and it's just scrumptious. You are so good at capturing their voices and mannerisms, whenever I read your fic I always see them so clearly. And there's always at least one line that makes me catch my breath, and this is the one that grabbed me in this fic:

The flame flickers, mirrored in his pupils, and you think you’ve always seen it there, even in the daylight.

And I love the sex which is really hot, but with this great depth of feeling, and the strength/weakness turnabout there at the ending, so well done.

halfdutch April 1 2006, 17:41:59 UTC

Ohhh, thank you so much! *beams* I'm so glad we finally got some canon J/S! Life is good again. ;-D

aervana April 1 2006, 08:19:54 UTC

Damn! So hot, so good, just wonderful.

halfdutch April 1 2006, 17:42:32 UTC

Wow, thank you! ;-D

kataclysmic April 1 2006, 08:22:53 UTC

Oh God, that's spectactular. Have been waiting for something post-Lockdown since the moment I saw it, and this was just -guh.

I have to go out, and I wish I didn't just to I could re-read and tell you properly how much I adored it.

Love love love.

halfdutch April 1 2006, 17:44:06 UTC

Awwww. *loves*

THANK YOU. God, it was such a great ep. I'm so glad you felt like this lived up to it.