I've never played a Harry Potter character before so please forgive any missteps. If you have any praise or helpful suggestions please let me know. Anon is off, IP logging is on - sorry but that's how I roll.
Just thought I'd let you know that no matter what age Severus is, I believe he would never ever tell Lily that he loves her, as you had him do here. Like... he would have to be seconds from death before he would even consider telling her. And even then, it's debatable. He only said as much as he did to Dumbledore because he wanted her safe and he knew Dumbledore had the power to do so. Beyond that no one knew, not even Voldemort (who can't understand love to begin with), because he's just that good at concealing his true self. Also, if anyone asks, he's bound to deny that he's in love with her.
I went with it because be regrets never telling her before. I was working on the idea that he was thinking he might not get another chance because in his world she is dead and she doesn't like talking to him on the network.
However, I understand your point and I agree. As long as you are okay with it, I'm going to edit his comment to remove that portion.
Not a problem and again, thank you for pointing it out. I was so obsessed with everything going on in DDD that I was letting my own ship preference interfere with my characterization which I'm trying to avoid like the plague.
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However, I understand your point and I agree. As long as you are okay with it, I'm going to edit his comment to remove that portion.
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