Open Your Eyes (Chapter 2)

[haleyjames1]

Author's note: This story takes place after the events of Doomsday. My first Chlollie fic, probably in 3 or 4 chapters. The character of Jacob Shepherd is pure invention and portrayed by Ryan Philippe.

Summary: What happens when Chloe is wrapped up in an abusive relationship? Who will be there for her? Who will protect her?

Comments

[kryptolori]

YAY protective Ollie, god i love him, liked the way you handled that. Good update, I enjoyed it, esp the flirting!

[modscho]

Just had to take a quick "skim" through your journal after I commented on your new vid - and I found this one. I guess I might have reviewed it on fanfiction.net, because I totally loved it. Please tell me you plan to continue!!! *pretty please*

Greetings from Germany
Ines

[haleyjames1]

Should I continue? Honestly dunno!

[modscho]

Yeah I think you should, but I know what you mean about it though. Sometimes the muse just strikes and sometimes it takes us into a direction that wasn't planned and then we're lost on ideas.
I fear that this might happen to me again, too. I've already written more than I've posted so far, but right now I don't know how to continue afterwards. :(
Anyway hope you will write more, but if you won't I'd understand. But maybe you could stick to vids then? Because it was great!

[haleyjames1]

Well now I'll definitely think about it. Thanks for your opinion!

[ext_3995112]

Is this story going to be completed? It is good